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I Believe Trump--NOT


A sad state of affairs

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Comment by
easyeverett1
 
 
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Hey my friend, I came back to visit my
fanstorian friends and others after a
six year sabbatical from poetics. I guess
I put it all on the table over many years
and the well went dry. Anyway, you are
one hell of a writer and this articulate,
truthful rant was manna for the soul. My
wife and I along with millions of other
cognitive citizens feel as if we have somehow
followed Alice down the rabbit hole and found
no tune-in, turn-on, drop-out acolytes at all.
Only Trump's fanatic fans of fantasy kept screaming:

Up is down, left is right, day is night, lies are truth,
truth are lies, brown is bad, black is worse,
Anglo-Saxon white is right and on and on and on!

And Vladimir his buddy has a tape or maybe two,
Salacious Donald Trump a-doing what he shouldn't do.
Misogynistic groper with a racist history,
A clownish interloper with genetic vagaries.

Slovenia now has a very famous Stepford dame,
Melania, another Trump appendage to his shame.
Robotically she follows right behind her muddled man
While waiting for approval from this mentor to the Klan.

I hope we will wake up and find we've all been etherized
And Trump was just a nightmare that cannot be analyzed.
Or maybe Mr. Mueller will get done and finalized
And then arrest the family Trump always idolized - HIS OWN

Again, you show integrity and talent in one write. Thank you.

easy





 Comment Written 06-Oct-2017



reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
    I wrote this a long time ago, but it goes to show you, my concerns have only intensified. I am heartened more people have woken up, and the ;mantle' of the presidency has been so badly tarnished, they are beginning to speak out.

    You might enjoy spending time on the political forum. There are some who are part of the the deplorables, but many who are like-minded and are not afraid too speak out.

    Thanks for the review. I'm not writing much these days, but I hope your imagination will get fired back up with the feedback available her. ingrid
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I get your point view. those who voted for this man will soon see what real piece of work he is. I don't think he will last a whole term..


 Comment Written 30-Mar-2017



reply by the author on 30-Mar-2017
    Thanks for reading. I JOPE he doesn't lasy, but take comfort in the fact there are very strong people who are standing up to him and calling him on his lies.

reply by poetsteve15 on 07-Apr-2017
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Rasmine
 
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Well written!! And so unlike my rant which was just my feelings, not really a lot of research. Your's seems very thought out and researched.
Good luck in the contest.


 Comment Written 29-Mar-2017



reply by the author on 29-Mar-2017
    I'm a bit of a political junkie with the news stations playing in my ear most of the day.This is a wild ride, a first of this theatrical drama. Thanks for reading.
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Mustang Patty
 
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Thank you for this insightful essay. Trump is all these things and more. I heard once, before the election, that if Trump was elected, he may well be the LAST American president. I believed it then, and I believe it now.
~patty~


 Comment Written 29-Mar-2017



reply by the author on 29-Mar-2017
    There are some very decent people ion Congress and the Senate. I think I'm more afraid of civil war, but I do believe those dedicated politicians will not give up easily. Thanks forreading.
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Bill Schott
 
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This piece on Trump has hit all the high points and flows like a editorial meant for the NY Times. It would be place next to the crossword puzzle. The first clue on the puzzle would be 1 across: Fake President . Begins with T.


 Comment Written 29-Mar-2017



reply by the author on 29-Mar-2017
    Thank you very much for reading and the stars. Greatly appreciated.
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MLEaton
 
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A brilliant essay, very well argued and succinctly put. Very well written, too. Also brave, in the circumstances! I particularly like the conclusion. It seems that Trump divides rather than unifies ... Thank you very much for sharing. I hope you win the contest.
Marion :)


 Comment Written 29-Mar-2017



reply by the author on 29-Mar-2017
    I don;t know how the country will heal, but I think surviving this guy will be the beginning. Thanks for reading and the stars.
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A very good contest entry. I hope you do well. It is hard to win contests. The writing is so arbitrary. It takes skill and some luck.


 Comment Written 29-Mar-2017



reply by the author on 29-Mar-2017
    It was more therapy than wanting to win. If I was playing to the crowd, I'd have probably chosen puppy dogs and kittens as my subject. LOL. Thanks for reading.
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While I couldn't agree more with the position on Trump and politics, this article fell more to the side of what the author doesn't believe-- Trump. The focus of the article could have been-- believing in America.

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 Comment Written 29-Mar-2017



reply by the author on 29-Mar-2017
    Ultimately, I believe America WILL survive, but don't believe Trump. It satisfies the CEC requirements. Thanks for reading./
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Dear Mystery Writer,

You have established your points in a clear and concise manner. This is well-written and travels through each point carefully and in order. Well done. I did note some places that need you attention, however:

1.) being a thug and killer on the Bill (O')Reilly show,

2.) The general consciences, Trump promised a drop of sanctions once in office.
--> I don't understand this sentence. Is this saying what you mean to say?

3.) but I believe America will survive.
--> this seems to be in almost direct opposition to your opening paragraph with it's dramatic description of the current state of the US. Revise a bit, perhaps?

Thanks and good luck!


 Comment Written 29-Mar-2017



reply by the author on 29-Mar-2017
    An auto correct on concensus. Still can't spell the damn word. Thanks, I make the other two corrections, adding a few words to the ending.
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This is an informative and clearly written piece on the current president. I like your point about Obamacare. While it may be far from perfect. those who criticize it, offer no alternative. I also always felt that Trump has an enormous ego, making me feel uncomfortable. This is an excellent entry for the contest and I wish you well.


 Comment Written 26-Mar-2017



reply by the author on 26-Mar-2017
    Thanks for reading and the stars. For Trump, it was all about winning, beating someone or.something, and the power. Mr. Khan was right, DJT is only NOW learning about how American democracy works.
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