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To Life, With Love-Sonnet


In praiseof past remembrances

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wow, this is an outstanding piece of poetry dear jaybird! the positive attitude towards life is clearly shown in your poem! i just love it!
thank you for sharing!
blessings!
rebekka x


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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2017
    Love the comment-love the six-thank you
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Nice !! It is a great entry for the sonnet contest friend, it flowed effortlessly off the tongue, I'm no sonneteer but I believe it to be sound in meter and style. I loved your second stanza, thought provoking and relevant...


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    I appreciate your comment-thank you
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This is such a beautiful sonnet and the message is very precious. We do need to take to heart the importance of being grateful for each day, and each joy of life.


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    Loved your comment-was greatlyappreciated
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This is a beautifully well written sonnet with great resonance and deep meaning which I truly identified with, a joy to read and well worth six stars, love Dolly x


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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2017
    I loved your comment and I loved that six-thankyou
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It's a great poem of memories, of looking back, of recalling lost loves, and I think the sonnet form is great for that. it is very ornamented, crafted, traditional, and timeless. the images of life, carrying on here, despite the losses suffered, seem hopeful and uplifting. there is sadness in life, there is loss, but there is also rebirth, renewal, and resurrection. estory


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    I appreciated your very thorough comment-thank you
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Love is stronger than hate and will always show it its strength. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. There is very good imagery.


 Comment Written 31-Mar-2017



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    A very enj joyable comment-thank you
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A lovely tribute to a lost loved one.
These are the things that give life it's true worth.

Very true words. I will post them where i will see them daily.


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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2017
    A very enjoyable comment-thank you
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A reflection filled with gratitude for 'blessings thoughts can oft bestow 'while not forgetting 'all the wasted battles fought 'some of life's priceless moments revered here'linger in the warmth of friendship's glow'


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    I enjoyed your comment-thank you
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A lovely sonnet of a reflection on the best of the past. We all have wasted battles fought, and regret the energy we wasted on such stupidly futile occupation. Or at least I do. As we get older friends and loved ones slip away. Only living always in our hearts. A lovely sonnet, a gift really.


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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2017
    I enjoyed your comment and I certainly enjoyed that great rating-thank you
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This is lovely Jaybird. Well written sonnet in Shakespearean sonnet form with good rhyme in abab maintained throughout. Very nice final, rhyming couplet. I particularly like your second stanza and agree with you. This is a well written sonnet.

To hear a newborn baby's lusty cry,
To see the golden sun give earth rebirth,
remembered love brings forth a blissful sigh:
These are the things that give life it's true worth.....Regards Dorothy x


 Comment Written 31-Mar-2017



reply by the author on 03-Apr-2017
    I certainly enjoyed your great commet-thank you
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