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A kingdom for all (audio by the author)

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Comment by
Tier V. King
 
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Good morning, RG: It' s like I said, pure poetic genius. This poem is another masterpiece written by you. You said, after reading, "Charnez" that I could write but if only I could write something as insightful and perfect as this. I mean I do love some of my poetry but I give all credit to God for my poetry. I struggle lately with trying to be better at it.

This is amazing. I have one six left so I shall hold on to it as I intend to read more in this portfolio. There are no favorite lines because it is all so marvelously written. I love it!


 Comment Written 17-Oct-2017



reply by the author on 17-Oct-2017
    Don't try to be better, for you will have to answer to better than whom....none can be better at you, than you, and your you will develop, but only when you look back, in time. You can never see it without looking back after a period, because the mind will deceive. So you just keep writing, keep to heart, keep to the magic of explanation, and the improvement comes without you looking for it. You can write, dear Tier, and you shall write like yourself...so trust me.
    Thank you so much. I certainly will be reading some of your work after Christmas or during the period. I have three poems to turn out before then...and mine take at least 10 days to complete and two to re-read and edit, going back after breaks. I will, in time, tell you of a way to re-read and re-write refreshing the mind, then going back with new eyes. You will improve faster.

    My best.
    RG

reply by Tier V. King on 17-Oct-2017
    Thank you so much for those gems, RG. I really appreciate it.
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Caressa_08
 
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So sorry to learn about 'Jackarrie' and hope she can defy what sometimes modern medicine can do, by possibly making a problem even worse. Though your wonderful poem shows as in nature there is always hope with each season's passing there is an eventual renewal, and an example being that of the tree, that stands tall, enduring so much to once more become a radiant when it's time is right.

Caressa_08


 Comment Written 14-May-2017



reply by the author on 14-May-2017
    Thank you, Caressa, for going back to this. I appreciate the six stars and the support.
    Wishing you a beautiful day.
    RG
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jlsavell
 
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My dear RG,

I apologize for being so late in reviewing. I am moved greatly by this incredible work. Your poetry is always as soothing as a symphonic, angelic waterfall, as inspiring as the tiniest winged creature in flight and treads oh so softly on the heart's code and the human spirit, its beauty and serenity enters so adroitly I suspect to even the most dour personality. You are beautiful. I would love to sit across from you my friend and have a conversation.

your fan always
jimi


 Comment Written 04-May-2017



reply by the author on 05-May-2017
    Thank you dear, Jimmi.
    You are one here that I admire much, and hoped for a good result for your work in Poem of the month...and my friend, as happy for you as if it was I.
    Bravo.
    Couldn't have happened to a nicer person.
    Bravo. Congratulations on the win.
    I see Dean's work is missing from the result screen, after coming joint second with me, I know not why, but do not let it take focus of a lovely write and a good win against some exceptional work...so you be proud dear, Jimi.
    Thanks for the six stars.
    Have a wonderful feel, and a lovely day.
    RG
    RG
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~Dovey
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Hi RGStar:

This is a beautiful poem and I especially loved your audio recitation of the poem. The music in the background is one of my favorites and a lovely touch to compliment your piece. I must have missed this one when you originally posted. I'm glad to have a second chance at a look. Good luck in the Poem of the Month contest!

Kim


 Comment Written 03-May-2017



reply by the author on 03-May-2017
    Thank you, dear, Dovey. Thank you s much. That you visit, and found it pleasing, is all, and worth more than you think.
    My best wishes and thank you.
    RG
Comment by
mountainwriter49
 
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HI Ron,

I'm so very glad I found this beautifully inspired and penned poem this afternoon. I'm taken away by it. I admire your superb use of English and found the internal rhymes delightful. There's nothing to suggest for improvement.

Well done, my friend.
Ray


 Comment Written 26-Apr-2017



reply by the author on 27-Apr-2017
    Thank you for going back to this Ray. So glad you enjoyed it.
    My very best wishes.
    Have a great day.
    RG
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Poetic Friend
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Wow, RG, what a poem! I love this for many reasons. To name a few:

1) The fine execution of rhyme and meter with sixteen syllables. That's challenging in itself. Only seasoned and experienced poets could craft under such restrictions;
2) The enriched language (word choice), which is one of your many signatures in poetry;
3) The personification;
4) The beauty of your message. Reminds me of Jesus' resurrection;
5) The twist in the last sentence. Wow; and
6) Your author's notes, which are useful when reading your work.

Exceptional work, my dear friend.


 Comment Written 22-Apr-2017



reply by the author on 23-Apr-2017
    What a blinding review. Thank you so much dear friend.
    Thank you for the super six.
    My best wishes.
    RG
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Gert sherwood
 
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Hello RGstar
So sorry I'm so late reading your excellent rhyming poem. MY Fs friend you have a special Gift from God being able to express your self with poetry

Gert


 Comment Written 21-Apr-2017



reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
    Thank you so much, Gert. Always nice to receive your encouragement, especially where such honor is concerned.
    Thank you so much. You help me believe.
    My best wishes.
    Have a great day.
    RG
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webfoot
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beautiful Ray. It's so good to hear you read your poetry again. I have a friend that is almost blind and I told him about you. I think your poetry in an audio book would be so good for him - you are very uplifting to listen to.


 Comment Written 20-Apr-2017



reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017
    That kind of thing always inspire me to go the extra mile. I will have him in mind for a future write in which I will dedicate to him, for this one of the reasons I do audio, yet it may be a concept with CD and book combined if I can get that sort of publishing, but we will see where the opening is and which front.
    I will ask his name at the time of composition.
    I like little moments like these for it inspires a moment of thought, so my next work after will be a dedication to your friend, for the reasons obvious.
    Thank you for the moment, dear friend.
    Just haven't found or figured a way out yet for the actual first book...but it will come.

    Thanks for the six stars.
    Best wishes.
    RG

reply by webfoot on 21-Apr-2017
    welcome Roy. That's very nice. I'll tell him what you have in mind. He works with disabled people, fighting for their rights in B.C.
Comment by
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Wonderful poem, RG. I enjoyed the flow, and your use of rhyme is excellent. I especially like 'dew drops of joy; tears from His face'. I hope you had a wonderful Easter. Many blessings.. Christy


 Comment Written 20-Apr-2017



reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017
    Hi Christy, hope you had a great Easter also.

    Thank you for the support.
    Have a great day.
    RG
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Rasmine
 
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Hello, RGStar,

Cool technique--you reading your own poem. Awesome job.

I love these lines:

I have seen distance where silence held court with the beauty of sight
The lark sings in search of love, still impassioned, though muted applause


 Comment Written 19-Apr-2017



reply by the author on 19-Apr-2017
    Best wishes, Rasmine. Thank you. Glad you enjoyed.
    My best to you.
    RG
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