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The Magic Words


Learning Manners

  3 total reviews 
Comment by
Vijay Kumar V
 
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'But as a lass at mother's knee' This very opening line is a wonderful phrase and the flow went beautiful till the last line. Very well written. A thankyou to motherhood.
Have a nice day


 Comment Written 07-Apr-2017



reply by the author on 07-Apr-2017
    Thank you for your review. Your time and the "Excellent" rating is appreciated.
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Nikki-Nicole
 
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The title, 'The Magic Words', gets the reader's attention.
This is a very good poem.
Great choice of artwork.- That's a beautiful portrait of a mother and child.
Thank you for sharing it.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-


 Comment Written 06-Apr-2017



reply by the author on 06-Apr-2017
    Thank you for you "Excellent" rating and your very kind words. Do stop by again.
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Oh dear! Such a painful way to learn manners! At least, the poem shares it in a cheerful way with a darling baby and her adoring young mother picture.


 Comment Written 06-Apr-2017



reply by the author on 06-Apr-2017
    Thank you for your 'Excellent Rating'; Ah, lyenochka, willow switches only sting with a light touch; and are a an incentive to remember good manners. They only hurt one's dignity.
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