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Yearning For Home


A serious case of homesickness

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Ms. Snyder
 
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Jay bird another stunning write from way back!!!! This was incredible! I am writing this review on my iPhone so if the exclamation marks are not showing I am sorry! That is what I wanted to convey a beautiful and awesome inspirational write that even now I can relate to. Cheers, Fonda


 Comment Written 27-Apr-2019


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This has to be one of your best! The structure is perfection and the yearning is deeply felt. 1944 is a time I never knew, but your poem is timeless too!


 Comment Written 27-Apr-2019


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Agreed! This is an excellent Sonnet. The visual is fantastic & the thoughts are homey & simple. It wants to make one return to the familiar where life is easy & carefree. giovanni


 Comment Written 27-Apr-2019


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The author's words are heart warming, descriptive and creative.
The reader pondered on the words of this poem and thought
about how there is no place like home. Thank you for conveying
this in your poem. Also thanks for the author's notes.
Have a great weekend!


 Comment Written 27-Apr-2019


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This was a good read, Jaybird1. I liked the flow of it and the imagery you wrote about. The homesickness really came through strongly. Nice job of writing.


 Comment Written 27-Apr-2019


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Flame on brother, let your light shine, finding your statement inspiring, viewing your mug shot, detailing your seriousness, given in my opinion about this particular read.


 Comment Written 27-Apr-2019


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Great flow with this piece. The rhymes were good as well. this was a very well written piece with wonderful imagery and I thought you did an amazing job.


 Comment Written 27-Apr-2019


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This is quite a sweet poem of nostalgia.I like the form ,third and fourth lines are short and it gives a special rhythm to the poem.Hope you have realised your dream and is now where you want to be "no facing to rear no big brass to fear.."


 Comment Written 27-Apr-2019


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Hello Jaybird1,
Nice piece of poetry beautifully depicting its theme.
Impressive wording; smooth and enchanting flow throughout from the beginning to the end with lovely rhyming scheme.
The last stanza is particularly noteworthy.


 Comment Written 27-Apr-2019


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Thank you for your service, Jaybird. I know the feel of being far away form home and praying that I return. I'm Air Force also, yet you are 25 years my senior. One day you will find what you are looking for. Thank you for sharing your love with those around you. :)


 Comment Written 26-Apr-2019


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