Jay bird another stunning write from way back!!!! This was incredible! I am writing this review on my iPhone so if the exclamation marks are not showing I am sorry! That is what I wanted to convey a beautiful and awesome inspirational write that even now I can relate to. Cheers, Fonda
The author's words are heart warming, descriptive and creative.
The reader pondered on the words of this poem and thought
about how there is no place like home. Thank you for conveying
this in your poem. Also thanks for the author's notes.
Have a great weekend!
This is quite a sweet poem of nostalgia.I like the form ,third and fourth lines are short and it gives a special rhythm to the poem.Hope you have realised your dream and is now where you want to be "no facing to rear no big brass to fear.."
Nice piece of poetry beautifully depicting its theme.
Impressive wording; smooth and enchanting flow throughout from the beginning to the end with lovely rhyming scheme.
The last stanza is particularly noteworthy.
Thank you for your service, Jaybird. I know the feel of being far away form home and praying that I return. I'm Air Force also, yet you are 25 years my senior. One day you will find what you are looking for. Thank you for sharing your love with those around you. :)