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Is this what the baby is thinking?

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HI Sandra, so good to see you in my PM sweet girl...I know my babies didn't like a lot of the baby food...and if I didn't like the smell...and they didn't like the taste...that one was out the window...they both loved they baby food fruits...LOL...I love your poem you...and the picture is precious...I love babies...love you Linda xxoo

I hope and pray Sandra every night for Sarah and Ian...and you...has Ian gotten any more help with his foot???...and I hope Sarah had a wonderful trip...and her husband...LOL...you take care my wonderful friend...all will be ok...sooooo much love to you all...xxoo


 Comment Written 30-Apr-2017



reply by the author on 01-May-2017
    Hi, Linda. Mine hated anything that wasn't freshly made, and it had to be what we were eating. I think it's better that way and cheaper! I love babies too, they always manage to put a smile on my face even when I'm feeling rotten. :)) Love you too, my wonderful friend. :) xxxxx

    How are you? Have you had all your treatment? Is it all clear? Are the headaches still gone? Sarah and Steve haven't gone away yet, I think it will be a bit later now, as her treatment has started again. Fingers crossed, and God willing she will come through this on the right side.
    Ian still has his foot problem, we don't mention the C word, he said it would be tempting fate, and he's a bit worried that if he starts thinking it's not a problem anymore, it will start to move and none of us want that. It's a bit like sitting on a time bomb, you don't know when it's going to go off. He is getting a bit of financial help now, thank goodness, but nothing on the medical side as yet. Mind you, he's at the hospital so often with his foot, heart, kidneys and eyes, I don't know if they could fit in any more appointments. He's hanging in there, and staying positive. That's all we can do now. You are always in our hearts and prayers, my sweet friend. Thank you for being the friend you are. Sending you lots of love from all my family! xxxxxx :)

reply by l.raven on 02-May-2017
    Hi Sweet Angel, I am doing better...so far so good...will know more on Thursday...I will be glad when they get these stiches out...their driving me nuts...they itch...it's where they had to go in and get everything out...but it's not much longer...I will let you know what they say...the headaches are mostly gone now...thank God...I am so sorry Sarah and Steve didn't get to go on their trip...but one thing at a time...they will...when she is healed...my poor Ian...sweet boy...I know he will get better...I just wish it were faster...the financial help will help...I'm just glad he is going to the doctors for the problems he is having...I think he will feel better now with the help...some times stress has a lot to do with how you heal...you are all so in my heart...and I am sending you lots of love as well...take care my sweet friends...love you...xxoo Linda
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-That is quite a picture, Sandra!
-Your author notes are appreciated,
and it is nice to see you back on FS.
-I know FS friends have been thinking of you.
-Humor is a good way to get back.
-I like how you take the baby's point of view;
I would want the ice cream, too.
-Thanks for sharing


 Comment Written 30-Apr-2017



reply by the author on 30-Apr-2017
    My dear friend, thank you. I am trying to get myself out of the doldrums, it's been so hard and it's not over yet. We need some good news now. Thank you for your lovely review, when I saw the piBcture I had to write something for it, the baby's expression is classic, I've not seen one quite so expressive! Big hugs, my friend, it was lovely to see your name again. :) Sandra xx

reply by Pam (respa) on 30-Apr-2017
    You are so welcome, Sandra. I will keep you in my thoughts. The baby picture was a clever one. You did a good job with the poem. It was wonderful to see your name again, too. Hoping for the best for you and your family.
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What a fun poem that MOST adults can relate to
Of course, there's always a few who haven't a clue
I'll bet those were peas, broccoli or some other green
Give me apple sauce, peaches and ice cream
A very nice poem with excellent rhymes
Sorry to hear about the sadness
and this is a very good start
Well done
RS


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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2017
    Thank you, dear Robert. I rather fancy that for my sweet, I do like peaches but haven't had it with apple sauce, sounds lovely. I'm pleased you liked this bit of fun, I just loved the baby's expression, it's hilarious. Well, I've made a start and will start being a nuisance again, lol! Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xx

reply by rspoet on 30-Apr-2017
    You can be a "nuisance" as much as often as you like!
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Can someone tell me why babies make such goofy faces? I think that what's really going on is that as we become older we become better liars. Aunt Suzie this is delicious.


 Comment Written 30-Apr-2017



reply by the author on 30-Apr-2017
    You are so right, Tom, lol, trouble is, we can't always find a way to get rid of the yukky goo, unless we keep accidently throwing it on the floor. So, perhaps we should try to come up with a lie that doesn't sound like one. A sudden case of an allergy? Thanks Tom, perhaps I could ask the Sunday advice team what we should do? :) Sandra xx
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Well written depiction of exactly what the baby must think in that situation.

Then, he wises up and drops the "goo" on the floor in order to get what he really wants...ice cream!



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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2017
    Babies learn young, lol! Thank you, Brett for reading my poem, it was just a bit of fun. I'm sure that's what they do think when forced to eat that rubbish. :) Sandra xxx
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Good to be silly, for silly means happy a lot of the times.
Love to see things like this sometimes, it just breaks the rigidity of structure and makes you realize life is important, and all is not so serious as we would make it.
Hope things are getting better with the family.
Best wishes.
RG


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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2017
    It is, RG, sometimes. It certainly puts things into perspective. The photo of the baby did make me smile, and writing the words I thought were going through the child's head, lightened what has been a miserable time of late. Thank you for your thoughts on this, my friend. :) Sandra xx
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Hello my friend welcome back, you started right with this fun poem when you've been away a while it is hard to settle back in where you left off I enjoyed your poem I wonder myself how babies eat this food it doesn't look appetising at all well done regards Jill


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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2017
    Hi, Jill, it's lovely to 'see' you again too. It's been quite a while but hopefully, I'll be back in full swing soon. A day at a time. I'm so pleased you enjoyed my comeback poem, lol, that baby's face is so cute. Big hugs for the 6 stars, my dear friend. :) Sandra xx
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Oh, Sandra, this made me laugh out loud. Wonderful! I've been missing your writing, and I'm so glad to see you back. It's a beautiful poem. I know it's not been an easy time for you of late, and I'm so sorry. I hope to post the next chapter of Sally tonight. Working on it right now. Hugs. Ulla xxx


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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2017
    Bless your heart, thank you, Ulla! It was the picture that brought the words out, I haven't been able to write anything for ages, perhaps now I'll be able to. I'll be there looking for your chapter, I love Sally! Thank you for the lovely 6 stars, my dear friend. :) Sandra xxx
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LOL - that's exactly what she's thinking. This is adorable, Sandra, and brought back memories of when my boys were babies.

You did a good job matching this poem to the pic. I like how you used the word 'sick' in place of vomit. Good word choice. Hugs, Lou


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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2017
    Thank you, Lou, coming from you, this is high praise indeed!!. When I saw that photo the words just came, it's a gorgeous picture, isn't it? Thanks, my friend. ( Would a child use the word 'vomit?? LOL, I think I might have done but then, I was an exceptionally gifted baby! LOL) Big hugs, my friend. Sandra xxx
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Good for you, Sandra. I have most certainly missed you. This may seem like a nonsense poem to you butit was fun to read. When you're ready I suggest you try your talented pen at writing a mystery starring a female teacher or something. Bless you, my friend. Bob


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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2017
    Thank you so much, my dear friend, that is so nice of you to say that. A mystery about a female teacher? I've just started another book, once I know where it's leading I'll start to post it. It's all playing out in my mind at the moment. Thanks again, my friend, you are the best! :) Sandra xxx

reply by Mastery on 30-Apr-2017
    oooooh! Don't do that, Sandra. LOL. Go ahead and write. Let the characters and plot write the plot themselves. Honest. I am sincere. Each of my books started with just a germ of an idea...then I started writing and let the characters take me werever they wanted...Amazingly, the book writes itsel...in your mind it eventually all comes together. try it....you,ll like it. good Luck. Blessings Bob
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