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Is this what the baby is thinking?

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Ha ha - I think the expression on baby's face says it all - so cute.

a light-hearted, down-to-earth poem, Sandra - You've not lost your
touch, my friend - well written and entertaining.

Margaret


 Comment Written 30-Apr-2017



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    Aw, thank you, Margaret, I love the faces children manage to put on, this one just caught me and I had to write something. I'm glad you enjoyed it, my friend. I've just read your latest chapter, it's amazing! :) Sandra x
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So sorry to hear about your sadness. I hope writing will bring you some relief and add a bit of joy to your life. This little poem certainly put a smile on my face.

Sending prayers and (((HUGS))) your way,
~patty~


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    Thank you, Patty, that's so nice of you. It has helped and I'll hopefully be able to write more now. I'm glad you enjoyed this one, the picture was the biggest inspiration and the funniest. :) Sandra xxx
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This is hilarious! There is an art to feeding babies as spitting it out and flinging the food all over the place brings back memories, great artwork here and warm sentiments in your words, love Dolly x


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    They know exactly how to handle us, don't they, LOL? I'm so pleased you enjoyed the words I wrote for this really funny photo. Thank you so much, Dolly. :) Sandra. xx
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I had wondered where you were.
So, sorry to hear of your family sadness, but glad to see you are working your way back to writing which can be very therapeutic.
Yes, the goo looks very unappetizing. You made a joke of it. Good for you. Disgusting stuff to feed anyone.

Best wishes,
:) ellen xx


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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2017
    Cancer is a dreadful disease, Ellen, I think it has hit most families but it just keeps happening in mine. But, we have to keep positive and I am trying now. Thank you, I am really pleased you enjoyed my comeback, that picture of the baby's expression really caught my imagination, lol, bless his heart. Thanks again, my friend. :) Sandra xx
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Hi Sandra, so good to see a post from you! I've been concerned about you and hoped you hadn't left the site for good. The face is so funny! You did a great job with this silly poem. I'm sorry you have been going through a hard time. It seems to be going around these days.


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    Thank you so much, Melissa, for your kind thoughts. I saw that baby's face and it just begged for words to go with it, it's a classic! I'm really pleased you enjoyed it. Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xxx
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Hi Sandra, Ha Ha you have it in one I wonder how many babies think like this. I think you have captured this image really well with you as always excellent writing and rhyme that made me smile. Hope all will be Ok for you and your family thought with you .But it is noce to see you back Cheers Christine­???­???­???


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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2017
    Thank you so much, Christine, for your great review. I'm so pleased you enjoyed it. Also, thanks for your kind thoughts, my family are struggling to keep their spirits up, but we have no control on cancer, it's a wicked disease. Big hugs, Sandra xx
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This was definitely enjoyable Sandra. It has a great rhyme format, it is so easy to read and follow and the topic corresponds so well with the picture. Poor little mite has to eat those awful tasting baby food things. I agree Yuk. Great job, thanks.


 Comment Written 29-Apr-2017



reply by the author on 30-Apr-2017
    Hi Alie! Thanks so much, my friend, the baby's face is classic, isn't it? I had to write a poem for it, I'm so pleased you enjoyed the result. Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xx

reply by aryr on 30-Apr-2017
    You are most welcome Sandra, it was indeed a great picture.
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Happy playful attention to children that age is important mixed with imagination. A child loves that sort of attention. Figuring out their world is a joy when you see they are only learning. See it on their faces and your heart goes out to them. Your imagination to get along with children is what this creative effort means to me. I'm sorry, I don't have any knowledge regarding poems various structures accept what I learn through scrutinizing what I read and see. This is a lovely poem, loving a child.


 Comment Written 29-Apr-2017



reply by the author on 30-Apr-2017
    Babies expressions are stories in themselves, I love them. Thank you so much for your lovely review, my friend, I'm delighted you enjoyed my interpretation. :) Sandra xx

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    You're welcome.
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This is an adorable poem. It seems to speak for the baby. I am glad that the mum finally gave her some ice cream. Your illustration is a treasure. I am so glad that you are writing again. Humor is a wonderful medicine. Well done.


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    Thank you, Nancy. It was nice to write and complete this poem, I've had a period of emptiness due to so much heartache in the family. Now I hope to be able to write more, it has helped me. I'm so pleased you enjoyed this one, that baby's face is adorable, I could just imagine these words coming from him. Thanks again, my friend. :) Sandra xx
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It's nice to open my message box to find one of your poems or stories that always amuse and entertain me. I'm so sorry to hear about all the sadness in your family life, it always seems to run in cycles. Just when we think things are good, they all go to pieces. I hope and pray the good Lord will give you strength and bless your family with a miracle.


 Comment Written 29-Apr-2017



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    Aw, thank you, Ric. You've really made my day and put a big smile on my face, which I needed. You really say the nicest things. I'm glad you enjoyed this one when I saw the picture it begged words to go with it. I appreciate your prayers, my friend, members of my family are in dire need of them, cancer is eating its way through and it's just unstoppable. xxx Sandra
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