Carnival Season In New Orleans
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Is this what the baby is thinking?

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Gert sherwood
 
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Smiles sandramitchell
Of course your I don't thin so cute rhyming poem is a good start just keep you foot on the gas pedal and keep writing
The picture of the bay with the dismayed look is perfect to go with its thoughts

Gert


 Comment Written 29-Apr-2017



reply by the author on 29-Apr-2017
    That's so nice of you, Gert, thank you. I'm really trying at the moment, but this start is encouraging me to carry on. I'm so glad you liked it, that baby's face could only be saying that. lol. :) Sandra xx

reply by Gert sherwood on 29-Apr-2017
    Good to see you back
    Gert

reply by the author on 29-Apr-2017
    Thank you. :) xx
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I usually do not review pieces that pays only two cents, but this sounds to me like a spoiled trying to get his way with mum. I thought it quite funny. Patricia


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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2017
    I don't know what happened, Patricia, it posted before I had a chance to promote it. I am so sorry, I feel awful. Just shows how out of practice I am. Thank you for reading it, you are such a friend. :) sandra
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I'm sorry to hear you've been going through a rough patch.
I have to say your poem is hilarious. Till I read baby at the top, I thought it was a puppy speaking.
Thanks for sharing.

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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2017
    Thank you so much, Maria, I'm so sorry it went off before I'd had a chance to promote it. I'm really pleased you enjoyed it. :) Sandra xxx
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And it's a good start. It made me laugh any way. Sorry to hear things have been bad lately. Here's hoping they will be looking up in the near future. Keep licking the ice cream. That yucky poo stuff will do you no good at all.

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 Comment Written 29-Apr-2017



reply by the author on 29-Apr-2017
    Aw, thank you Jim, I don't know how it happened but it went off before I promoted it, I'm so sorry. Thank you for your kindness, my friend. I'm hoping things will get better, I have two close members of my family in the last stages of cancer. So awful and they are both young. Thank you for reading my bit of fun. :) Sandra xxx
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