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One of my many blessings

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Alcreator Litt Dear
 
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This speaks you are happy to introduce your second son Jaime the president of the National Junior Honor Society, a mature little boy, so lovable, he was an extra blessing, your sister and Jaime born on 03/03/03,I liked. DR ALCREATOR


 Comment Written 28-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 28-Dec-2017
    Thank you again, Alcreator. You are the greatest.
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Thank you dear Tier for sharing this info about Jaime. I loved every word of it. He sounds like an awesome young man with a bright future. I know he had great role models in his formative years. I know you are proud of him & I am too! Great job. Jan


 Comment Written 27-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 28-Dec-2017
    Thank you again, Jan. Oh yes, Jaime is such a very special young man. He continues to make us all so proud. I am so happy to have him in my life. He has always been a true blessing and a gift for me. Your reviews are so appreciated...much love.
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Sharon Haiste
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Another well written story about your wonderful family.
You must be so very proud. Your writing is interesting and entertaining.
Well done and thank you for sharing.
Sharon


 Comment Written 27-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 28-Dec-2017
    Thank you so much, Sharon and I truly enjoy reading your post too. You are an exceptional writer.
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He sounds like a very intelligent and understanding child; beyond his years in wisdom and confidence. Happy New Year to your family.


 Comment Written 27-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 31-Dec-2017
    Thank you so much for this wonderful review and yes, he is such a special young man. I am truly blessed.
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Dean Kuch
 
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Jamie sounds like an amazing young man, Tier.
You have every right to be proud of him.
"Jaime started playing the guitar at ten years old and he now makes his own music. Jaime has also built his own computer. This is the same child who at three years old used to download Surgery programs to watch Surgeons during heart and brain surgeries because he could not decide what kind Doctor he wanted to be.

He asked me, " Mom which is more important, the heart or the brain?" ... I hope you told him to always follow his heart and think twice with his brain before following his heart.
That gets 'em every time.
My heartfelt congrats to young Jamie, and you!
~Dean :)


 Comment Written 27-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 28-Dec-2017
    "I hope you told him to always follow his heart and think twice with his brain before following his heart."

    I really like that Dean. I will keep this in mind to share with Jaime. He has since decided to follow in his father's footsteps in the technical field. He wants to create computers and computer software. He plans to go to MCU which is a College of Arts and Sciences. There he could pick up his interest in the medical field again if he should decide that he is still interested in becoming a Surgeon. I, of course, would prefer that he still planned to follow his medical dreams and goals but it seems that his father has managed to change his mind for now. Jaime has so much potential so I am just happy with whatever he does or plans to do. He is truly a wonderful young man.

    It is always so great to hear from you, Dean. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing this. I really appreciate your support.

reply by Dean Kuch on 28-Dec-2017
    You're more than welcome, Tier.
    He's an amazing young man and I enjoyed reading Jamie's story.
    Take care,
    ~Dean
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You should be very proud to sing your son's praises. He is on the right path and I hope he will be rewarded in life spiritually. A fine Post, please hug him from me and tell him he sounds like a wonderful adult waiting to happen!
Hugs from me
Trisha


 Comment Written 27-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 28-Dec-2017
    Thank you so much Trisha. You know that I truly am so appreciative of your loyal support of my work. I will give Jaime a big hug for me as he still does enjoy my big hugs. I will tell him this hug is from a special friend. He is truly a special young man, a real gift, and a blessing. WOW! Thank you for the six stars. I just noticed this, wow! My writing is getting better for the year with FS so far. Hey, did you see the other short story introducing my daughter, it's called "Taylea's Teeth." Let me know what you think of that one. (whenever you get the time. The promotion ends this morning.
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Hey, T. Firstly, two aspects of this write. The first, how proud I am to read the progress of your son. I am so proud of him, as well the way you have spoken of him. I may take out the word 'spank' and replace with 'chastise' as reasons you may know for some will take it latterly, instead of hypothetically for only something said...and so judge.

The second, yes, an introduction, not really a poem, yet, not too comfortable seeing you go so deep on family on FS, and may be good to write just using character...save the final content for the book, if should be, where you then name names.

I just find, in many cases, things as private can expose to other thoughts from many less understanding where it may come to deep issues. Use pseudonyms, thereby focus is on the writing itself from the reader's point of view, and not what they feel they should or should not say, knowing the sensitivity of the subject matter.

Still, a lovely write.
My best wishes.
RG


 Comment Written 26-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 02-Jan-2018
    Good morning, RG: Thank you so much for reading this piece and you are right, one of the Poets did not like the word spank so I will go back to correct that word.

    I really get what you are saying also in paragraph two and was already deciding to change all the names in my book because a lot of the content is very personal. I may write it as a book taken from a real life story but not really my own story. This would be safer for me as a mother.

    Thank you so much for always taking the time to be my mentor and exceptional teacher. I appreciate you more than you know. Please have a wonderful day.

reply by RGstar on 02-Jan-2018
    You too, my friend. Good idea. i will write you an email that concerns your last post. Hope the Christmas was good and the New year even better. Mine was a disaster but not worth the time to talk about. My best wishes.

reply by the author on 02-Jan-2018
    Which one? July 196 which is part one or July 19196 - Part Two?
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A great story about your son. One correction though. It says that this is fiction. I think it's non-fiction, right? Maybe I just read it wrong, but you might want to check. Good job, and your little guy sounds wonderful!
Cheryl


 Comment Written 26-Dec-2017


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    Oh, hey there, Cheryl. It's great to hear from you again. I did go back to change the category from fiction to family-nonfiction. Thank you for bringing this to my attention. Oh yeah, Jaime is a true blessing and a wonderful young man. He keeps me smiling and is always great company. I so appreciate the time and attention that you have given my work. You are a loyal support for me and I am still checking every day for your posts. much love...

    Did you see the other short story about my daughter, it's called "Taylea's Teeth."
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This is a amazing mother to son story and connection about Jamie it's amazing his it don't lack of maturity at such a young age reminds me of my stepdaughter Nicole who was walking at 7 months and my grandson Alexander who had a full vocabulary in two language at 2 years old thanks for this talk to Ricky 1024


 Comment Written 25-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 25-Dec-2017
    Wow, Ricky these children are truly amazing also. You must write about them and thank you for reading these two posts so quickly. I truly appreciate you and your support.
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Jaime sounds like a wonderful young man. I can certainly understand why you are so proud of him. I am proud of him, too.

So...do you hate yourself?

Merry Christmas, my friend, with love. You are lovable sweety.


 Comment Written 24-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 25-Dec-2017
    Thank you so much for this six star review and for the six stars for "Taylea's Teeth." You are so amazing. I am so honored and grateful because I really did not know how to write and needed so many corrections as I wrote each piece. I am still looking forward to taking some kind of writing course. I feel like this last year I have been in a writing course.

    You ask the important questions so yes, I did think this was a deep statement for such a little person to put before me. I really thought about it. Why would he feel this way and is it, was it that obvious? Oh Yes, Yes was the answer that I came up with. We do things in life that show others who are really paying attention - how we really feel about ourselves. Jaime was always and still is a very mature little boy and very observant. He will always say exactly what he thinks and sees. So I had to tell myself that I must learn to treat myself better. I must learn to really love myself because it was very clear that I didn't. We will talk more about this soon but thank you so much for your review of this post. I am looking forward to more of your work. Much love again and many hugs.
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