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Mother's Day from a mother's POV

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there's nothing harder on the heart than when a child turns away for whatever reason. I can feel your pain through the words, and I hope your prayers will be heard - maybe mine will be too,
~patty~


 Comment Written 17-May-2017


reply by the author on 03-Jun-2017
    Thank you Patty. I think you understand and I'm so grateful for your kind words. Hugs, MM
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Alcreator Litt Dear
 
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This is beautiful, so passionately written, a mother loves her beloved babe lost in heavenly abode but she believes her only little heart would return once on this heaven as she prays on Mother's Day; I liked and enjoyed the lovely read.


 Comment Written 16-May-2017


reply by the author on 03-Jun-2017
    Thank you for reading my poem. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. MM
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This is a beautiful Mother's Day card, Adonna, and although the most gushing, or filled with joyous emotion - it is what mother's day is all about. There are many mothers who look for joy, but find mostly pain on Mother's Day. I am one.
Loved this poem. I know there are many mothers out there who can relate.
Beautiful Sonnet in well paced meter. It was a pleasure to read.
Rose.


 Comment Written 16-May-2017


reply by the author on 17-May-2017
    Rose, I'm sorry to know you, too, experience pain on Mother's Day. I know there can be many reasons for such sadness. I wish no mother ever had to feel that kind of grief. Thank you for reading my poem and for your lovely comments. I appreciate this so much. Hugs, Adonna

reply by Just2Write on 17-May-2017
    I had only one child. She died when she was 34. it is a bitter-sweet day for me.
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Nicely done for Mother's day, dear MissMerri.
I had not followed up this year as you have, so I will remember mine through your words.
A lovely write.
My best wishes.
RG


 Comment Written 16-May-2017


reply by the author on 16-May-2017
    Thank you for reading this, Mr. Star. ;p Best wishes to you also.
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Motherhood takes on many aspects and you explore one that is not often mentioned. Mothers are always concerned for their children from the date of their birth on. You describe the concern in a loving way and let your children know they are cherished.


 Comment Written 15-May-2017


reply by the author on 16-May-2017
    Thanks for your understanding comments Debi. I do sincerely appreciate this review. MM
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A heartfelt poem filled with love and also heartache and yearning. Not sure what has happened but I felt the sorrow in this meloncholy write, beautifully written poem, love Dolly x


 Comment Written 15-May-2017


reply by the author on 16-May-2017
    It is always sad to lose a child, whether to death, or drugs or mental illness. It is truly difficult to accept sometimes, but hope never dies. Thank you for reading and for your sensitive response. MM
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This is such a beautiful poem, my God, I couldn't get through it without a box of tissues, I started crying and had to start over sniffling and tears all the way though. lt is a very touching poem, I loved it immensely. ~Kerry


 Comment Written 15-May-2017


reply by the author on 16-May-2017
    Thank you Kerry. I hope you know, you were not alone. I was teary writing it, and many others have said they had tears also. I'm so grateful for your kind words and the exceptional rating. Thank you very much! MM

reply by Kerry Robinson on 16-May-2017
    Oh, good, lol
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A very well written Sonnet Sequence that sincerely, touchingly expresses a mother's love for a lost child. It flowed together well on that vibrant iambic pentameter. As you clearly demonstrate, not all thoughts on mother's day are happy ones. Well done!


 Comment Written 15-May-2017


reply by the author on 16-May-2017
    Thank you so much Tom. I very much appreciate this kind and understanding review, and all the stars too. ;")
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This is very sad but beautiful and filled with hope that the wayward child will soon return to the fold and into mothers loving arms. Very poignant and sweet Adonna. Nancy.


 Comment Written 15-May-2017


reply by the author on 17-May-2017
    Thank you for this kind review Nancy. I deeply appreciate these understanding comments. MM
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Maria Jose Garcia
 
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Lovely poem and sad as you say.
Am I understanding this wrong or did you lose a child? If so, I'm sorry for your loss.
As you say, being a mother is the best. I've also adored it... most of the time.
Thanks for sharing.


 Comment Written 15-May-2017


reply by the author on 17-May-2017
    Thank you for reading my poem, Maria. To answer your question, I lost a child, but not to death. I still hope and pray she will return. Love waits for her here. MM
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