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This is so beautiful and touches my heart and soul. Your writing is excellent, I love the rhymes, and the sentiment is so well put, that I cried a tear reading your poem. The descriptive verse is astounding, and as far as I can tell, real to the core. I thought of my mom and her love for me. I was a troubled child and needed her constantly. She loved me fiercely anyway. She never gave up on me, while others turned away. Mother's day is hard for me because I hurt so much, for the way my mother died a few years ago. She was in terrible pain, both physically and emotionally when she slowly died. I hate the way she died and wouldn't wish it on my worst enemy. But, she is no longer in pain. Yet, the pain stays with me.
Thank you for letting me share and come closer to my grief which I surely need to tend to. You're a good friend.
Take care, Jesse
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Comment Written 15-May-2017 |
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reply by the author on 16-May-2017
Jesse, thank you for opening your heart so willingly and honestly. I'm so sorry you have that sad memory of your mother's death, but I hope you are comforted by the sweet memories of her love for you and the knowledge she is now in a happy place without any more pain or suffering. It is always difficult to let our mothers go. I still miss my mom too, and have regrets that I wasn't in the room with her when she died, but God knows better than we sometimes. Thank you for reading my poem and for the tender response. I appreciate your stars and thoughts and your friendship too. Thanks for being here. MM
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reply by Jesse James Doty on 16-May-2017
Thank you for your kind thoughts. You are most sincerely welcome for all three.
Your friend, Jesse
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