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Memoirs of a Witness Tree


A poetry collection published by Kelsay Books

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Humblest Apologies
Very eloquently expressed! I like how you speak for all of us about our nervousness of sharing on such a deep personal level with strangers to review and balancing fulfilling the conventions of poetic structure with full expression from the heart.
Congrats on the Seal of Quality! I'm too chicken to try.


 Comment Written 29-Jan-2019



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Humblest Apologies
Rhyme is only cheap if it fits the form but doesn't complete a TRUE thought... I always find it difficult to like a rhymed piece if it feels cheap and tawdry not substantive and right... hee... yours, diana


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Humblest Apologies
Talent is in the eye of the beholder. Some will love and some will hate the same poem. One should never try to compare him/herself to someone else. You are right that as long as sincere feeling is in a poem it usually is good no matter the form.

Congratulations for receiving the seal of quality.

Keep writing

dragonpoet


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Humblest Apologies
Congratulations on earning the seal of quality :) That is quite an accomplishment and a feather in your cap. Many have talked about trying for the seal and being turned down. It scares the heck out of me. Yet it is always in the back of my mind to try it some day.

Joy xx


 Comment Written 23-Jan-2019



reply by the author on 23-Jan-2019
    Thank you. I tried it with two collections, the first being poems written in high school and as an undergrad. I just could not get those poems up to Seal standards. This second set was submitted in August 2017 and has been much revised along with having a couple of the poems switched out; it took three tries to get the Seal of Quality on this one.
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An Affirmation of Faith?
This is very good. Not only does it describe what the driver went through, but it makes the reader feel like they are in the car as well. It has a nice rhythm and rhyme scheme too. Great work!


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An Affirmation of Faith?
This is beautiful. Wow, this was certainly a close call. These accidents, incidents, always reaffirm our faith. I like this form, your rhyme is wonderful. Good luck in this contest!!
Blessings...


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Your poem was a well-crafted poem. It flowed well and had a good rhyming scheme. I was in a wreck also, and recall the same emotions you detailed in your poem.


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A car accident is a good lesson in learning to love being alive. Word flow makes it a read to believe and brings the story to life. Perfect picture. Good luck.


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An Affirmation of Faith?
Great inspirational writing, Randal. Something like that which is experienced in this poetry, is enough to give anyone religion even if they never believed before. Great entry into the contest, my friend. Blessings. Bob


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Rating of Chapter 35 -
An Affirmation of Faith?
Randal

Thank you for sharing the extraordinary write. I appreciate and value your skill and look forward to learning from your talent and expertise.

Your poem is an excellent affirmation of faith presented in a real and thoughtful write.

Cheers

Eugene


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