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Remembrance

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Great presentation for the special day. Some many gave so much for our freedom and to many do forget and think it just another day to celebrate and for the life of them can't say why


 Comment Written 24-May-2017



reply by the author on 24-May-2017
    Thank you for your excellent rating. Your comments unfortunately are so true and heart rendering.

reply by country ranch writer on 24-May-2017
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This is a good Acrostic poem you have penned here highlighting the glory of Independence Day and what it means. This is a very patriotic piece with an excellent picture of the American flag flying high as one should hold one's head.

My only comment would be that you have spelt the word incorrectly. It should be spelt - 'IndependEnce' and not - IndependAnce. I'm sure you'll attend to the amendment without me having to reduce your stars. Thank you for sharing. ~DD


 Comment Written 23-May-2017



reply by the author on 23-May-2017
    Thank you for your kind words, your correction, and the excellent rating. Do stop by again. Will make the correction noted.

reply by PoemsOfDD on 23-May-2017
    Nicely changed. :-) ~DD

reply by the author on 23-May-2017
    Thank you!!!!
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This is a timely poem to recognize and appreciate the great freedoms we have in the US as well as to respect and honor our military, flag and constitution and teach the next generation to do the same.


 Comment Written 23-May-2017



reply by the author on 23-May-2017
    Thank you for your kind words and your excellent rating. Do stop by again.
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Thank you for sharing. I love the plurality of ideals mentioned in your poem. Not just patriotism alone, but devotion, love, and charity as well. Love of country must not become a cliche or superficial expression which takes on loaded meanings and negative connotations.


 Comment Written 23-May-2017



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    Thank you for your kind words and the excellent rating. Do stop by again.
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A great tribute poem that captures your feelings of dedication and pride very well. I think you have made some great word choices and show your emotions well. This is a wonderful poem that shows how truly patriotic you are. Thanks for writing it.


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    Thank you for your kind words and excellent rating. Do stop by again.
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