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A Very Special Love


A meaningful love

  52 total reviews 
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Gert sherwood
 
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Hi Jay
Yes I agree with you what you said
not only the words you say of how much you love,
for goodness sake take actions and show how much you care for them

Gert


 Comment Written 01-Jul-2017


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Love is something that can occur in any place-anytime. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. There is good imagery.


 Comment Written 12-Jun-2017


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What a beautiful message woven in sonnet form. Yes, we do get bogged down in life
and if we look around we will behold someone with a need that we can fulfill.

I enjoyed the flow of rhyme and the couplet ties the piece together nicely with a hint of a challenge.
Rubylou


 Comment Written 12-Jun-2017


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Most all of this is a very fine example of your work. I like it and yet I can't tell if I would actually like to keep it as a meditation myself. The thematic treatment of
love is good. My problem is that the last two lines seem like a prose affirmation.


 Comment Written 12-Jun-2017


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Nika2016
 
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A poem of wisdom and truth..People say, I love you, so easily, but are they there when the chips fall?
I have been disappointed by so many...but true friends do exist...One I have had since age 5.


 Comment Written 12-Jun-2017


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dejohnsrld (Debbie)
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How very true this is. It is so easy to say you love someone, and so much more difficult to take the actions which show you truly do. A great message and I enjoyed the rhyming couplets~Debbie


 Comment Written 11-Jun-2017


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So very true! One can't just talk the talk. One has to walk the walk as well. I agree with you, Jaybird1, a meaningful relationship can't just subsist of empty words.

This is a lovely poem with a wonderful message to everyone. Well written and presented to your reader. I especially love your opening two lines,
"If talking love is all you do,
your troubled heart may tell on you." :)

A pleasure to read! ~ ~ Connie


 Comment Written 11-Jun-2017


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You have put a lot of thought into your poem. You have written an excellent poem. Your rhymes are perfect. Everything flows and the poem is easy to read.


 Comment Written 11-Jun-2017


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Hi,

Nice, in depth, but straight to the point. I like how you didn't have to make this drawn out and sappy to convey your message. Even though brief in length, the simple yet thoughtful detail gave it all the life needed to do what was intended. And that was invoke a certain feeling. Well done! Take care.


 Comment Written 11-Jun-2017


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I so enjoyed this well written poem. Love, love, love this! I can't tell you how many times I have tried to convey this message to my children. We all get caught up in our own "stuff" that we miss the opportunities to act in love that are staring right at us.


 Comment Written 11-Jun-2017


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