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Symbol in the Sky


The rainbow is a message from God.

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This rainbow poem, Symbol in the Sky, takes us back to the reference of God's promise to not eradicate the people by flood again. Scientists can only tell us how God makes it possible.


 Comment Written 23-Jun-2017



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    Thank you for your keen insights.
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Hello friend I really enjoyed reading those poem about the rainbow I think that the alliteration is great in the structure and flow is very smooth nice imagery thank you very much for sharing this


 Comment Written 23-Jun-2017



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    Thank you for such positive words.
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I like your spiritual, if not religious, stance on rainbows. Well thought out and nicely written. A bible quote about the Noah situation may actually be a fitting addition to this poem. Lovely work. Good luck in the contest. Goodnight :)


 Comment Written 22-Jun-2017



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    Thank you for your insightful review and encouraging words.
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I find rainbows to be so lovely. My favorites are the rainbowed prisms that shoot off different colors through my windows. Just beautiful, blessings....


 Comment Written 22-Jun-2017



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    Thank you for your kind words.
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A very well-written poem and an excellent biblical explanation of the rainbow and its meaning that God intended. A sign in the sky that He promised not to destroy the world by water again.


 Comment Written 22-Jun-2017



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    Thank you for your good observations and comments.
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Good job on using the rainbow, in the way of Gods good graces in giving all of us a second chance, like the ryyhme you have throughout. Good luck in the contest.


 Comment Written 22-Jun-2017



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    Thank you for your positive review.
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I like the way you told the story of Noah's Ark within this poem. You also remind us of what the significance of the rainbow is really all about.
Perhaps a lesson here:
A rainbow forms when rainy days end,
a symbol God continues to send.
A rainbow is more than a beautiful sight,
it reminds mankind to do what is right.


 Comment Written 22-Jun-2017



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    Thank you for such detailed remarks.
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I enjoyed reading your rainbow contest entry "Rainbow in the Sky". You rhymed it well and had a beautiful message. Though I would have liked to see a nice photo.
Best of luck.
Marybell1.


 Comment Written 22-Jun-2017



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    Thank you for such a positive review.

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    You are most welcome.
    Marybell1.
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This is such powerful words and I do agree with the fact that the rainbow was made by God himself. It's really a shame that some people out there don't realize the true meaning of that.


 Comment Written 22-Jun-2017



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    Thank you for such positive words.
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This is a very good poem. The rainbow also symbolizes God's promise to never again destroy the world by water. I wish you well in the contest.


 Comment Written 22-Jun-2017



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    Thank you for your positive comments.
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