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jaded831
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I could see this happening being a pet owner myself. The pictures are excellent for your poem. I did have to read it more than once to get the full impact of your poem. But it was well worth it.


 Comment Written 24-Jun-2017



reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
    thank you I did fix it up to late count in contest. but it is fixed. GB
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Hello my friend


Good job with the syllable count and presentation. The poem is not my favorite. I don't like it when your lines don't flow. You ended a line with "the", it's not fluid. I suggest you change it but it's your call. In addition, your title says "best frends"


 Comment Written 24-Jun-2017



reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
    I took out the, (The) It is now fixed to late for contest but either way it is fixed. thank you Gb
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hello friend I really enjoy reading this humorous 575 poem I think that it is cute and cleverly written I like the message here thank you very much for sharing this and God bless you


 Comment Written 23-Jun-2017



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    thank you I use have both now just a cat but he does grow on u GBY
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If I were a dog (and in some female circles I am considered just that), I'd push the damn cat in too!
A dog's gotta do what a dog's gotta do.
Funny picture.
Good luck to you!
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 Comment Written 22-Jun-2017



reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
    Thank you I love cat and dogs they are funny at times
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Now this is just too funny! It makes me think of one of our cats too. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Teri


 Comment Written 22-Jun-2017



reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
    Thank you very much. GB
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This poem is well written. It is a humorous look at a friendship between a dog and cat. The imagery and picture match. Thank you for sharing your work.


 Comment Written 22-Jun-2017



reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
    thank you vary much friendship is to be treasured GB
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Very humorous. The art you chose fit your haiku perfectly. I gave it a 4 because the last line only has 4 syllables instead of the required 5. "He's" counts as one syllable. If you changed it to "he is", it would work. You may be able to change it before the contest. Good luck.


 Comment Written 22-Jun-2017



reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
    it is fixed thank you GB
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This speaks the funny act and emotion while an ironic-sentimental act, dog pushed the sleepy cat and helpless cat could do nothing, dog pleads cat is not of his friends; I liked.


 Comment Written 22-Jun-2017



reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
    I had a big black lab and a cat they would thing to each other just bug them, then night they would sleep together. if one got out all I had do is fine one other be close by. Thank you for the happy thoughts you brought back to me. GB
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Your little poem describes the included photo well. The humor comes shining through and though I felt very sorry for the little kitty, I loved how happy the whole thing made the dog,

Good luck in the contest,

~patty~


 Comment Written 22-Jun-2017



reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
    They both sleep together always no matter what one does to the other. GB thank you Do I know you patty? I have sister named patty?
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Thomas Bowling
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This is very funny. The pictures tell the whole story, except for what the cat did to the dog afterward. As they say, Hell hath no fury like a wet cat.


 Comment Written 22-Jun-2017



reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
    the cat I had waited until dog was asleep and hit his nose as hard as he could and ran off. GB
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