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oliver818
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I enjoyed your poem, you really did a good job of
Evoking the faces you talk about. The imagery is very powerful and the flow and rhythm and great too. Thanks for sharing and have a great day


 Comment Written 03-Jul-2017



reply by the author on 03-Jul-2017
    Glad you enjoyed it Thank you for kind words
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BlueTiger
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Nice job, I really like the theme of this poem and the way that you jump from person to person.

I would suggest punctuating this sentence a little different, something like this:

The last guy seems to have seen it all -
by that I mean he most likely is homeless - a Veteran;

Good luck on the contest,
-Blue


 Comment Written 02-Jul-2017



reply by the author on 02-Jul-2017
    will thank you very much I just did fix that and some other spots, it should read easier now. GB
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