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Wow, what an incredible poem! Watching a love one take a final breath. It could be quite chilling, evoking multiple emotions. If this is biographical, my condolence on your loss. I wrote a similar poem when my brother passed away, titled "The Transition."

Your word choice that you use to described that last breath is highly impressive/elevated. I love the imagery, personification and simile/analogy.

I am so became a fan . Otherwise, I would have missed this poetic gem!


 Comment Written 16-Jul-2017



reply by the author on 16-Jul-2017
    What a heartwarming and kind review, thank you so much for your unbelievable words and generous rating
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