Wow, what an incredible poem! Watching a love one take a final breath. It could be quite chilling, evoking multiple emotions. If this is biographical, my condolence on your loss. I wrote a similar poem when my brother passed away, titled "The Transition."
Your word choice that you use to described that last breath is highly impressive/elevated. I love the imagery, personification and simile/analogy.
I am so became a fan . Otherwise, I would have missed this poetic gem!
Comment Written 16-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2017
What a heartwarming and kind review, thank you so much for your unbelievable words and generous rating