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Comment by | Premier Author | | Premier Reader | | Poet Rating      | Author Rating For Short Works     Rank: 3 | Author Rating For Novels      | Script Rating      | Review Stars         Rank: 29 | | |
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Comment by | Premier Poet | | Premier Reader | | Poet Rating     Rank: 45 (+2) | Author Rating For Short Works     Rank: 29 | Author Rating For Novels      | Review Stars           
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""Oh god, don't wish that on me. You're talking hearing aids, hair loss, wheel chair, arthritis so bad you can't even cut Jello, eventually a nursing home." ... Can't even cut Jello--now that's funny, lol!
Well, that's one way to get rid of unwanted telemarketers, heh-heh.
I've always wondered why it is they seem to call right about the time you're sitting down to dinner. It would have been a bit trickier for this old gal to pull this off if it had it been a woman on the other end of the line.
Great dialogue only story, Shari. This should be a strong contender. But this is FanStory and humpwhistle (Lee) has more than likely entered, so...
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reply by the author on 01-Aug-2017
Yeap, Lee wrote a humdinger. He's terrific at dialogue and very funny. I think the old lady could flummox a woman as well. Thanks for the sixer. That counts for a lot in the judges' eyes. :-)
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reply by Dean Kuch on 01-Aug-2017
Yes, I know, it matters.
It was well deserved in my book. I laughed aloud several times while reading this.
Good luck, Shari!
~Dean :)
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reply by the author on 01-Aug-2017
Making people laugh is better than winning. At least in my book.
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