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Fairy Tale Wedding


A grim episode

  23 total reviews 
Comment by
Rasmine
 
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Hello Mark,

Is this a true story? I'm looking for a Meia-like report :P

My favorite lines (were everything) and especially:
Mary had a little man, whose love was pure as snow,
Or, so she thought, until George strayed and gave Susan a go.
George be nimble, George be quick.
George took a bullet in his dick.
Congrats on winning!



 Comment Written 30-Jan-2018



reply by the author on 30-Jan-2018
    Thanks for finding this in the archives and reviewing. I don't know where Meia finds the time to uncover all the gruesome stories that she then so wonderfully writes about. I don't have that kind of attention to detail, so I just make stuff up.
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IndigoLady
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Lily & the Rose
 
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Loved it. Really loved the cleverness of using common phrases to set up each verse. Funny, clever, well constructed. The rhyme scheme is easy and unforced. You managed to tell the story without too much digression trusting the reading to get the point without too much help. Just enough economy of words to tell the story and still keep it sharp. Thanks for the laughs!!!


 Comment Written 23-Sep-2017



reply by the author on 25-Sep-2017
    Thanks for this wonderful review and the six - much appreciated.
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Justin Tyme
 
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Hey, this really had all the ingredients of a great poem in a story. I could hear it in my head all the way through. I don't know about rythim and meter and flow and all that hoopla, I just know I liked this. And that's what counts. Keep up the good work, Mark.


 Comment Written 19-Sep-2017



reply by the author on 20-Sep-2017
    Thanks so much for the six and for taking the time to read this. Much appreciated,
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Joy Graham
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Oh my! I can see why you won this contest. This is outstanding story telling, Mark. I don't know how I missed reading your entry before. (I've been absent from the site a lot in the last little while. Life has called my name.) I enjoyed everything about this story in a poem. You have raised the bar of excellency, my friend. Well done.


 Comment Written 19-Sep-2017



reply by the author on 19-Sep-2017
    Thanks so much, Joy for taking the time to read this even though the certificate had expired. I hope that whatever issues took you away from the site are resolved now. I look forward to reading more Joy-ful posts from you.
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nartoonla
 
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Hello,
That was really great! Bravo!! The title and all that you placed within. Fun with rhyming flow Not surprised you won! Excellent! Congratulation my friend.


 Comment Written 19-Sep-2017



reply by the author on 19-Sep-2017
    Thanks for reading this one in spite of the fact that the certificate had expired. I appreciate your kind words.
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A contest winning entry! A seven star rating from the Contest Committee for posting the winning contest entry.


 Comment Written 19-Sep-2017



reply by the author on 19-Sep-2017
    Very honored to get this - thanks so much!
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Extremely well done, in rhyme, choice of words and story. I love how you slipped in the verses to match the main story you were telling. The image too, adds much to the posting.

A sure winner!


 Comment Written 03-Aug-2017



reply by the author on 04-Aug-2017
    Thanks so much for the kind words and the six. Happy Friday, Fridayauthor!
Comment by
Mara Coy
 
 
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I think it is a very creative way of telling a story, I am interested in the way in which there is double ingenuity in the imagination of creating a narrative and integrating it into a structure in which both hemispheres of the brain are needed.


 Comment Written 02-Aug-2017



reply by the author on 02-Aug-2017
    Thanks, Mara, and Bienvenidos a Fanstory! I see that you are relatively new here - I look forward to reading your posts.

reply by Mara Coy on 02-Aug-2017
    Thank you Mark! in shortly I will take a dive in your work as well
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nancyjam
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I enjoyed reading your sad but humorous tale.
Excellent rhyme and meter throughout.
You should do well in the contest.
Great story.
Nancy


 Comment Written 02-Aug-2017



reply by the author on 02-Aug-2017
    Thanks so much for the kind words and the six, Nancy!
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kiwigirl2821
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Hello Mark. Well I just don't anyone who is not going to love this piece of writing. I mean it rhymes and tells the perfect story. Your imagination rocks! Well done and good luck. xoxo Kiwi


 Comment Written 02-Aug-2017



reply by the author on 02-Aug-2017
    Thanks so much, my Kiwi friend.
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