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Hello Barb,

This is a nice Pride entry. Your choice to pick your mother as someone you are proud of is great and this is a great poem giving her the credit that she deserves in have to continue to raise you on her own.

Thank you for this information about the ZaniLa Rhyme. It is yet another type of poem I did not know about but thanks to you I am now informed and taught. Thank you


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    There have been so many different forms introduced I can not keep them straight.
    Thank you for the great review, I wish I could have told mom how proud I was .
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Hello my friend and I am sure your mother would be proud of you to she taught you so much and you always express it in your poetry well done regards Jill


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    I wish I could have told her. Thank you so very much for the encouraging reivew
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Hi Barb; thank you for sharing this lovely tribute to your mom, and the lovely ZaniLa Rhyme. I enjoyed the work, and your use of the swapped lines worked well and didn't feel forced or contrived.

~patty~


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    Thank you so much for the encouraging review. This one was different for me but I wanted to at least try it.
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A lovely ZaniLa poem about your pride for your Mother, Barb. Form is well done, and the repeating line carries the emotions through each verse very well. Nicely done, thanks for sharing, and I love Cleo's artwork you chose.
cheers.


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    She is a fantastic artist. Thank you for the encouraging reivew
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Your use of words show how much your mother cared for you. There is strength in your poetic form that makes an impact on the reader. The topic of pride comes through clearly in your words.


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    Ijust wish I could have had more time to tell her. Thank you for the heartfelt reivew
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Well written tribute to your mother who gave you all she could.

Sure she would appreciate this one.

Nothing better than a mother's love. I know. I had the world's greatest mother of all time!


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    I wish I could have told her more. Thank you so much for the great review and for sharing
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I guess about everyone who makes it in this life has a mother or that special person to help them live and learn, teaching and picking them up so they can dust off and try again. Great job. :-)


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    Mom warned, she never dusted off.lol At first I did not like that, but I think in the long run it made me stronger. Thank you dear friend
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Hello,
How are you? I'm officially not upgraded, and since not getting member cents not reviewing poetry too much. Yeah, I guess like giraffmang says I'm shallow -- LOL! Hey TC :)


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    LOL he is quite the one isn't he? Thank you for the very kind review and for taking time to read. It was quite an interesting challange
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I've just read Jim's potlach and was impressed with the rhyme scheme, now I've read two, and I really enjoyed both. I love this one about your mother, we have a lot to thank them for. They did work hard for us, their children. I feel I've got to know your mother over the months and years that you've written your, Mama Said, poems. She definitely deserved your loving tribute. Well done, Barb. :) Sandra xx


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    I am honored and I thank you so much for the supportive review. I wish I could have been able to tell her that her advice is still going on

reply by sandramitchell on 13-Aug-2017
    She know, Barb, you can be sure of it. :) xxx
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Hi Barb,

I'm sure that's true, because of all those things your mama taught you without any doubt, since these are the values your mama ought not live without. I know your two sons learned the same before they died. It caused their spouses to always beam with everlasting pride.

~Shane~


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    Mom did have a lot of influence on the people around her and yes I do believe that is why my sons were happy and their wives were the best ever. I wish their children would have been able to understand that when they were younger for when they lost both sets of parents at once, the teaching fell to the caregivers. Thank you for the heartfelt review. You have hit a soft spot in my heart.
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