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Rocky Mountain Bike Ride

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Joan E.

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Your story was so believable and dramatic, I had to go back to the top and find the category was fiction! You added a good, reinforcing picture as well. Best wishes in the contest- Joan

Comment Written 23-Aug-2017

reply by the author on 23-Aug-2017

I am glad you found this believable - thankfully no, though. Thanks Joan for the review and best wishes:)

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Tab, I really enjoyed this short but gripping read. All I can say is it was quick thinking to threaten a bear with a bike and scream it away. You can come to my aide any day. A very enjoyable read so best of luck in the competition. ~DD

Comment Written 18-Aug-2017

reply by the author on 19-Aug-2017

Thank you DD:)

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Wow, if that's a true story, you probably saved that woman's life. I liked the tenseness of situation and the fact that the rider also became trapped. Good entry to the contest. Thanks for sharing.

Comment Written 18-Aug-2017

reply by the author on 19-Aug-2017

It's just fiction. Thanks so much:)

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Excellent short story Teresa. The bear at the end was certainly a surprise for the reader but even more so for you.
Very nicely done and good luck in the contest.

Blessings
Janet

Comment Written 17-Aug-2017

reply by the author on 17-Aug-2017

Thank you so much Janet:)

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Hi Teresa, a great little write, and the bear was certainly a surprise. Good reaction from the biker. They are not easy to write these short flashes, but you did a wonderful job. Good luck in the contest. All the best. Ulla:)))

Comment Written 17-Aug-2017

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Thank you Ulla:)

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Walu Feral

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G'day Teresa.

What a great contest entry and I hope you win, good luck.

It started of with such beautiful scenery and then turned into a darn nightmare... all done in 100 words. You are too clever. No typos to report.

Great job, mate. Sorry I don't have a six.

Cheers Fez

Comment Written 16-Aug-2017

reply by the author on 17-Aug-2017

Thank you Fez:)

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Thanks for sharing this.

But you know what the problem is a 100-word flash fiction? You just barely get a good story going and then it quickly comes to an end. JW

Comment Written 16-Aug-2017

reply by the author on 17-Aug-2017

That is so true about these 100 word stories. Thanks JW:)

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Looks like fun, there---Tabby. Favorite paragraph: The woman screamed as a bear stumbled out of the woods. Running toward the bear with my bike lifted, I screeched like a banshee. Hope it scared the bear off? Or,it could be meals on wheels. he -- he. Nice entry for contest. Amusing. Good luck in the contest! BOO-rageous!

Comment Written 16-Aug-2017

reply by the author on 17-Aug-2017

Meels on wheels - lmao:)

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Attention grabber from the start. And a hero to boot. Good fast pace, with an action scene to end with. Leaves to reader to fill in whatever they want, defeat or defeated, being in a more optimistic attitude, defeat you can't beat. lol great read

lulube good luck in the contest

Comment Written 16-Aug-2017

reply by the author on 16-Aug-2017

Hey you, thanks for the awesome sixer!!

reply by Lulube on 16-Aug-2017

welcome

lulube

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nbonner

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I liked this. It could be the start to a good book. I was surprised of the bear in the woods, nice turn of events. I liked, keep it up. Thank you for sharing and best wishes in the contest. N.B.

Comment Written 16-Aug-2017

reply by the author on 16-Aug-2017

Thank you so much for the review and best wishes:)

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