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kiwigirl2821
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Hi Hitch,

I think the word is "stepped" I looked it up to be sure lol ...

It's a great little story. Has a great beginning, catches the attention. A middle which tells the story and a conclusion which tells us the outcome. Yeah I'd say great entry. Good luck my friend. (Are ya getting excited about a vacation?) lol xoxo deborah


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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
    Very excited Debs : ) we have to get the girls visas this week, apparently Kiwis need them but an upstanding Englishman... like myself does not, ha ha. TRUE ! It is a month today.
    Thank you for the Nit matey, drinking Snakebites and writing is probably not the best combination, but Moana's on the Red and watching The Block, after having just watched project Runway... what else is a man going to do LOL
    You enjoy the rest of your evening now Debs ! Hitch

reply by kiwigirl2821 on 20-Aug-2017
    ohhhh mate sounds like the perfect evening. lol enjoy yourself. xx deborah

reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
    You know I am !! : ))
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You sure know how to write gore mate, this was a short but gruesome journey into the world of a broken heart that takes his own life...Women...the things they make us do.
Couple of possible typos mate....
Fleely....should that be freely
Stepted,....should that be stepped.
Brilliant mate
Mitchell

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 Comment Written 20-Aug-2017



reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
    Thank you Mitchell, I didn't see either of those mate, though I do like the sound of fleely, sounds like a word that belongs in Monty Python's The life Of Brian, LOL. Just killing time here mate,, Snakebite in hand : ) so thought i'd conjure up a little something while my girls are watching Project Runway... yea! Not really my thing, ha ha.
    I'm glad you enjoyed it mate< nits are dead!! Hitch
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