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Paintbrush


Sometimes, alone need not mean lonely (audio by the author)

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Comment by
karenina
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Your true emotions ring out throughout this piece. Understandably so. Poetry ought to be evocative, or what is the point? When we write of truth's in our life our hearts become gravid with tears... I felt this first one to last. Thank you for sharing all of your talented work with us.

Karenina


 Comment Written 24-Apr-2018



reply by the author on 25-Apr-2018
    Yes, thank you so much. Thank you for going back to this.
    My very best to you.
    RGstar

reply by karenina on 25-Apr-2018
    Your write moved me. Otherwise, what is the point? Thanks--Karenina
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Tier V. King
 
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Hello again, RG: This is yet another awesome creation, a masterpiece. I keep saying, "It's a shame that we cannot have more than six - six-star ratings to assign each week. Your poetry is so deserving.


"Oh, she'll not fret, for lonely is just a word when lonely has been kind."

The above is one of my favorite lines. This reminds me of how I used to feel as one of nine children. We had a large family and was always surrounded by the other relatives and many friends and friends of the family.

"Sometimes you could be in a crowded room but still feel so lonely or would wish for lonely. Alone was something I desired.

I related with your poem in some areas. It is also wonderful that you have written this poem with your daughter in mind.

I have 19 other messages to read this morning but I will return to your portfolio later. I am enjoying my reading so far. You are a poetic genius.


 Comment Written 12-Oct-2017



reply by the author on 12-Oct-2017
    Take your time, my dear T. I will certainly find as much pleasure in yours as mine, even though sometimes scraping the depth of soul, for such is not alien to us...we are the survivors.
    Be well, and thank you so much. Don't waste your stars on my past work, just so happy you read, for that is what we want as writers that our words are heard.
    Best wishes.
    RG x

reply by Tier V. King on 12-Oct-2017
    Yes, my friend, I totally agree with you on that. (smiling)
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seaglass
 
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So beautiful. When our children fell pain, so do we. The tone of melancholy can be sensed in reading this. The season Autumn, relates as well, as it is the season when things pass, repose follows, and rebirth comes in Spring. Seems like my painful breakups were always in Autumn. The illustration is also beautiful.


 Comment Written 23-Sep-2017



reply by the author on 27-Sep-2017
    Thank you so much, dear author. I have been away. Good to see you still here...just feeling if back...slowly.
    Hope all is well. Thank you for the support and 6 stars.
    My best wishes.
    RG
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Mary Ann MCPhedran
 
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A good write and like the tittle. I enjoyed reading your poem, and the poem kept my interest all the way to the end . Thank you for sharing. MaryAnn MCPhedran.


 Comment Written 21-Sep-2017



reply by the author on 27-Sep-2017
    Thank you, Mary. Appreciate the support. Wishing you a great day.
    Rgstar
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Curly Girly
 
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This is a beautiful and well-thought out poem that reflects on the journey of life and love. It's sad when people break up. So much life has been shared and then it is cast aside as if it were nothing. Too sad: On pastel paper, his words in a jar: ''how silent love has grown''.
You have a lovely narrational voice.


 Comment Written 20-Sep-2017



reply by the author on 21-Sep-2017
    Thank you so much, Curly Gurly. Nice of you to look in on this. Just had a whiz through your profile...really interesting. Would love to see some of your artwork. From time to time I like to choose a work from one of our author-artists to coincide with a composition. Would love to see a something...whatever the theme.
    Thank you so much for having a look in.
    My very best wishes.
    RGstar
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estory
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This is beautiful romantic poetry, in a very melancholy voice, with vivid images. that hemline, that paintbrush, that seems to create a dream like vision of love, that never quite materializes in real life. the rainbows through the trees, through the tears, seem to create a sense of hope through the sadness estory


 Comment Written 20-Sep-2017



reply by the author on 27-Sep-2017
    Thank you so much, estory. Much appreciated. Sorry so tardy reply, not sure fully back.
    My best wishes to you.
    Rgstar
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flylikeaneagle
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flylikeaneagle - Nancy Ann Gee
 
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Hi my *star***friend***RG**star******
I have not fallen off the cliff or flown away. No, not I.
I am studying online classes in poetry - Wordsworth at
Lancaster University. We are focusing on The Prelude.
I am also studying style and settings through Weslyn
University so I can write better prose.

As always, I love your sweet voice. Your daughter is alone
and yet not lonely. She can smile through the sad and glad
times and wish him well. She should not be labeled or have
anxiety attacks for his leaving. Your images are wonderful with
the beauty of the paintbrush never still, the clouds and a rose blooms
free. I like the use of your nature like a Wordsworth painting of words.
You again, RG have your own unique voice and style. Give our love
to your precious daughter. Time heals and family ties are the best.
Love, flylikeaneagle - nancy - be your journey fair ***************


 Comment Written 20-Sep-2017



reply by the author on 27-Sep-2017
    Oh, well done. Love Wordsworth. Good to see you using knowledge wisely.
    Thank you for the never ending support.
    My best to you and thanks for the six stars.
    Best wishes.
    RG

reply by flylikeaneagle on 28-Sep-2017
    OH R*G***STAR********
    I just finished a four-week course at Lancaster University on-line for FREE!!! This was about Wordsworth life, poetry, his sister and wife and friend who wrote with him. My favorite was the daffodil scene at the lake. Dorothy wrote about this first in April of 1802. William rewrote in 1804 and published in 1807 and 1815. Yes, I'm sure you know Wordsworth well and have seen the beauty of the land. Now, onward to character study in prose. I still have a hard time making a bad guy BAD. I was told to watch movies. Does Moana count? God bless you my STAR friend, poet and pen pal. flylikeaneagle - nancy
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TPAC
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Deep soul conveyance of life's real, ideals touching and appealing, wrapped in a caring message of desired hopes. I found these thoughts pleasing but mainly coherent in its flow read. Nice.


 Comment Written 20-Sep-2017



reply by the author on 27-Sep-2017
    Thank you so much. Good to hear from you.
    Wishing you a great day.
    RG
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I loved the picture that complements your poem very well. How nice of you to write a poem for your daughter, that lost her partner. She tries to get on with her life. Your poem rhymed all the way.


 Comment Written 20-Sep-2017



reply by the author on 27-Sep-2017
    Thank you, Robina. She didn't lose partner, just she is growing away from the relationship.
    Thank you so much for the support.
    My best wishes.
    RG
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I like that line "as if paintbrush'd of air". If presidents can create new words then surely a poet can. I found this piece quite beautiful. It has a lovely floating quality.


 Comment Written 19-Sep-2017



reply by the author on 27-Sep-2017
    Thank you, Sandy.
    Wishing you a great day. Hope all is well. Thank you.
    RGstar
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