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Is there any way Out?

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The picture you chose is very colorful and interesting. It is easy to see what you are driving at in your poem. It is hard to say so much in just a few lines. I enjoyed the metaphor "mankind's path".


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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2017
    Thank you for the kind review.
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Very true. The picture and poem speaks to me of the "tangled web" of "lies" as well as of the internet which makes the world so much smaller now. Mankind is still just as lost as before the words of the web brought paths together.


 Comment Written 21-Sep-2017



reply by the author on 28-Sep-2017
    Thanks for the kind review.
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This is a great antonym poem, simple but profound. I like the image of the web of
Chaos, very evocative. Thanks for sharing and have yourself a really great day


 Comment Written 21-Sep-2017



reply by the author on 28-Sep-2017
    Thanks for the kind review.
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A very well-written Antonym poem. We are sometimes feel lost and confused in circumstances out of our control. Until we found the right way to go through.


 Comment Written 21-Sep-2017



reply by the author on 28-Sep-2017
    Thanks for the kind review.
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This antonym poem, Tangled, has a good antonym pair and seems to reflect the current situation of lies and bringing the world to the brink in the absence of any credible leadership.


 Comment Written 21-Sep-2017



reply by the author on 28-Sep-2017
    Thanks for the kind review.
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Great image choice. Very culturally and politically relevant. This is a great antonym poem. I like how it reads as a sentence while still following the rules. Smart idea to center it. Good luck!


 Comment Written 21-Sep-2017



reply by the author on 28-Sep-2017
    Thanks for the kind review.
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