It's an interesting idea to personify the holidays, create some sense of competition between them, and then have this humorous moment when they put on the costumes and go trick or treating, and end up enjoying it. A bit of a twist on our every day perception of the holidays, told with humor and lots of color and personality estory
Comment Written 03-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2017
I did try to make the poem entertaining, estory.
I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment.
Take care, and thanks again.
~Dean
Hello my friend this is very well written enclose all the holidays that are celebrated not forgetting Halloween which can be a fun time to for the children when acting sensibly I enjoyed good luck regards Jill
Comment Written 03-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2017
Yes, acting sensibly and responsibly--that's the key.
Thanks so much for reading, Jill.
~Dean
A humorous poem. Very well versed. It is easy to see why you are a top ranking poet.
I would like to know how Stephen King would respond.
He (you) sure brought all the holidays together for one memorable fun night.
Thanks for sharing
Thuroughly enjoyable. I love the story telling here. A lot of fun to read. I imagine it must have been fun to write. Great rhythm. The rhymes were smooth, easy and natural. Thanks for sharing this fun little tale.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2017
Thanks for reading, Sandy.
I'm glad you enjoyed the poem.
~Dean :)
Hey Dean,
Another wonderfully written poem From our own Steven King. Loved the way you tied all of the Hollidays together. Very creative as usual. Thanks for sharing
God bless
August
Hi to your ghouls and boys. I like this and it is a creepy feeling. I don't know if you recall, we had a chat once about the form of the Raven? I think you said something about that. I am going to post the new Ravenelle form tomorrow either in potlatch or in a poem of my own, if you would like to have a look.
Having fun with my Fan Story friends while petting the cat.
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Oh so clever and delightful. Very entertaining and brilliantly creative bringing all the Holidays together for one giant night of fun. Each holiday had the chance to dress up as something totally new , out of their box. How much more fun can one have than spending the evening with Steven King. Your graphics are spot on and not so morbid and scary. A good poem to read to my grandkids.
I know Halloween is your favorite holiday and it shows. This is an awesome poem, it does Halloween justice. I love the pictures and that you included Stephen KIng. By the way, I just watched, Gerald's Games, it was really creepy. It's a Stephen King movie. Watch it if you get a chance. Well done, honey.