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Love Wins (Cinquain)


Cinquain

  22 total reviews 
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I am of the same opinion, Teresa. No matter what for, or variation, I truly belive it wins...one way or another. If only many could realize such, we would be in for less wars, less hate and less breaking up.

My best wishes.
RG


 Comment Written 27-Nov-2017



reply by the author on 27-Nov-2017
    Thank you RG:)
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honeytree
 
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Love is the most important word
from the beginning of time on earth
Love is so important to allow us all
to enjoy our lives and share with others
The following words outstanding.
"live in Hope, Faith, and Gratitude ~
Love wins."

Honeytree


 Comment Written 26-Nov-2017



reply by the author on 27-Nov-2017
    Thank you for the lovely stars!!
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I really like this piece, Tabatha. So simple, yet with much depth. Carefully chosen words make a great impact for your words of wisdom. Good luck in the contest.

lulube


 Comment Written 25-Nov-2017



reply by the author on 27-Nov-2017
    I'm not Tabatha (though tab should stand for that - lol), I'm Teresa. TAB is my initials. Thank you so much for all those stars:)

reply by Lulube on 06-Dec-2017
    lol I don't know why I called you Tabatha. wonder where my head was at? sorry about that

    lulube

reply by Lulube on 08-Dec-2017
    jUST WANTED TO WISH YOU AND FAMILY A VERY MERRY X'MAS

    LULUBE
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A good poem for the cinquain poetry contest.
Well written and well said.
Let's hope love always wins.
Good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon


 Comment Written 25-Nov-2017



reply by the author on 27-Nov-2017
    Thank you so much Sharon:)
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Thank you for sharing your salute to love in this Cinquain form. I enjoyed your repeat for emphasis and your timely focus on "Gratitude". Smiles and happy, holiday weekend- Joan


 Comment Written 25-Nov-2017



reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
    Thank you Joan:)
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This is a well written Cinquain for the contest. Love wins always, how right you are. I can also relate well to the last three lines. No faults, completely lovely. Best wishes for the c0ntest.


 Comment Written 25-Nov-2017



reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
    Thank you Ine:)
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Love always wins because we all want to be loved, even those who do evil deeds want to be loved, it is the easier option and the most pleasurable, wise words, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x


 Comment Written 25-Nov-2017



reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
    Thank you Dolly:)
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You put volumes into these Cinquain,with your great messages.

and when evil prevails,
live in Hope, Faith, and Gratitude ~
Love wins

Alas, sometimes love doesn't win, and hate overcomes. But we have to pray.

I wish you luck with this excellent rendition of the form.


 Comment Written 24-Nov-2017



reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
    Thank you so much:)
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G'day Teresa.

Beautiful work, mate.

Yes, indeed, love wins. It's strange for me, when I think back, before I met Delia, how I never even considered love... crikey! Now I know and I couldn't live and wouldn't want to live with out it.

A very good contest entry, my friend, and I wish you the best of luck in it. I'd like to see you win.

Cheers Fez


 Comment Written 24-Nov-2017



reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
    Thanks Fez. I am glad you and I have both found our true loves.
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Love wins when it joins the right couple. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. There is very good imagery.


 Comment Written 24-Nov-2017



reply by the author on 25-Nov-2017
    Thank you Charlie:)
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