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Sitting On Two Chairs


an Epigram

  9 total reviews 
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This epigram, Sitting On Two Chairs, presents a brief, memorable poem that also comes with several ways of interpreting it. Republicans? Cheating spouse? Too broad a bottom from eating all that cake?


 Comment Written 31-Jan-2018



reply by the author on 03-Feb-2018
    Thank you very much.
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Susanne M. Psyris
 
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Great epigram, ytbard, that made me laugh myself silly! I can easily visualize a well-rounded butt taking up occupancy on two chairs!!! One funny picture to me. This piece can also be applied to a cheating spouse/lover who always want their cake and to eat it too! Great job. Great luck in the contest! God bless and hugs, Susanne


 Comment Written 27-Jan-2018



reply by the author on 27-Jan-2018
    Susanne, thank you so much for this extraordinary review and the honor of six stars! I am glad you had a laugh over my epigram. There is a category
    of people that can never settle for only one chair (lol) They want their cake and eat it too, they are weak willed and indecisive. I encountered those in my life and know what pain it is.

    Thanks again for the great review and all these stars.
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Melissa
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Excellent!! I loved this! I think this is a good entry for the Epigram writing prompt.
A good picture would nicely compliment your verse.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.


 Comment Written 14-Jan-2018



reply by the author on 17-Jan-2018
    Thank you so much for the great review.
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Hey, Spiderman has morals. He's a super hero fer cryin' out loud, he is required to set a good example for others to follow.
He's never failed to deliver yet in a single one of his comic book stories. Why, he even defeated Superman in a head-to-head match up once.
Good Epigram.
Flows well.
~Dean


 Comment Written 10-Jan-2018



reply by the author on 17-Jan-2018
    Thank you so much, Dean, for taking.the time to review my work.

    I changed the picture and I think, the image fits the poem better than.a good and noble Spiderman.
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This is so right of epigram contest prompt rich and teams will symmetry footwell red well no grammar issues ejective an object the contents were excellent and description measures firmly in place good luck in the contest dr. Ricky 1024


 Comment Written 01-Jan-2018



reply by the author on 02-Jan-2018
    Thank you.very much.
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I love this write, it is short and poignant and has a great moralalistic touch and the artwork appropriate as the cunning fox has no morals, this is a favourite for me, love Dolly x


 Comment Written 01-Jan-2018



reply by the author on 02-Jan-2018
    Thank you for the superb review and a six. I am honored.
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Sharon Haiste
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I think this is a good entry for the 'Write An Epigram' writing prompt.
Your sly picture is cute.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon


 Comment Written 01-Jan-2018



reply by the author on 03-Jan-2018
    Thank you so much for the great review.
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oliver818
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Nice poem, it's a good entry for this competition. It has good flow and the message is very clear. Thanks for sharing this and have yourself a really great day


 Comment Written 31-Dec-2017



reply by the author on 01-Jan-2018
    Thank you so much.

    Happy New Year!
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AnnaLinda
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Wow Unknown Poet

You've really made an incredibly strong moral statement using a very
impacting metaphor
to hit home your message
which causes one to pause and take consideration.

Great rhymes, flow and it's sure to be a strong contender.

Linda


 Comment Written 31-Dec-2017



reply by the author on 01-Jan-2018
    Wow,

    What an incredible review. Yes, it's hard to find a worthy topic to fit into a unique form of an epigram, and I am glad you thought I have accomplished this.

    Thank you for the excrotional review and the six.

    Happy New year and God bless.
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