God Teaches Us Life!
A 24 Line Fiction; God takes our tests, teaches us life
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Sherman541
 
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So sad when people have to break out hearts. They know what they are doing and instead of just saying this is it or it is over - they sneak around behind your back and you find out all the lies and all the pain comes rushing in. So very sad, but you have captured the essence very well. Nice picture too. I hope this did not happen to you, but it so, I hope you are doing much better now. Sherman541


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What a dark poem. A very descriptive look into a broken heart. The pain and sorrow of it all. It's well written, nice flow, great word choice draws us in, helps us feel heartbreak.


 Comment Written 13-Jan-2018


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