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Autumn Picture Show


5-7-5 contest entry

  62 total reviews 
Comment by
rama devi
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i love that closing line - shifting gears in transition. Lovely artwork. Nice voicing. Congrats on placing in the contest! Very fine work, and nice alliteraiton of A & L and consonance of F, M & S plus the soft C in cinema

Sounds super read aloud!


Love,
rd


 Comment Written 05-Apr-2018



reply by the author on 05-Apr-2018
    Hi Rama, thank you my angel for a wonderful review...I love the picture...thank you for going back and reading my poem...love you girl...Linda xxoo

reply by rama devi on 05-Apr-2018
    Love love love and infinite smiles! :)
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Gert sherwood
 
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Gert sherwood Recommends:
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Hello Linda so glad I kept a few of my 6 stars
To give you for your cinema view of the beauty of a mother and children watching the last leaf tumble from a maple tree.
Gert


 Comment Written 23-Jan-2018



reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018
    Hi Gert, thank you so much sweet lady for going back and reading my poem...I love this picture as well...the family look like they are looking at the cinema of Autumn...thank you for all your so lovely stars...and a wonderful review...God Bless...love Linda xxoo

reply by Gert sherwood on 23-Jan-2018
    You are welcome Linda
    Gert

reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018
    smiling big...xxoo love

reply by Gert sherwood on 23-Jan-2018
    Good we all need to smile
    Gert

reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018
    LOL...I know I do...xxoo

reply by Gert sherwood on 23-Jan-2018
    We all must learn to at least give a little grin
    Gert

reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018
    I would rather smile...but there are those days...LOL...xxoo
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Tier V. King
 
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Hey Raven: I know that I said that I would start from the back but this first poat caught my attention. I am loving the cinema of autumn show too, as the last leaf falls. If this is an example of your worst poetry then I can't wait to read to read the rest of it and lok at the # of reviews. Wow, you must be awesome. I will read more later.


 Comment Written 23-Jan-2018



reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018
    Hi Tier, LOL...you make me smile sweet girl...thank you so much for a wonderful review...I am honored by your words...you have a wonderful time...smiling big...love ya Linda xxoo
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LIJ Red
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Looks like an excellent entry to a five/seven/five contest, to me, anyway. I missed the show this year. A hard rain fell one windy night and all the bright leaves came down at once.


 Comment Written 23-Jan-2018



reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018
    I am so sorry you missed the show...I love the leaves when they are falling...sigh...thank you so much for a great review...love Linda xxoo
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rjuselius
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This is a fine piece of poetry dear linda! I especially love the second line. I think it is rather clever.
Thanks for sharing!
Good luck!.
Blessings and a big squeeze!
Rebekka x


 Comment Written 21-Jan-2018



reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018
    HI Rebekka, thank you so much for a wonderful review my sweet friend...Blessing and a big squeeze to you as well...love Linda xxoo
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Jannypan (Jan)
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Linda.
Your well chosen words + awesome graphic make a memorable poem. Good job on the syllable count. Your few words do tell a great concept of Autumn. It is amazing, does put on a show, & is watched by all. Autumn leaves are beautiful--up to & including when the last one falls. Best wishes in the contest. Jan


 Comment Written 20-Jan-2018



reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
    HI Jan, thank you so much for wonderful review sweet girl...I am so glad you like it...I love the picture as well...and love the colors of Autumn...thank you...Love to ya Linda xxoo
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Leineco
 
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::::applause:::applause:::applause::::

This is truly a wonderful concept Raven..startled leaves
jumping with joy as the white-lettered credits start to roll
and panoramic fall exits stage left!

Totally enjoyed this :-)


 Comment Written 20-Jan-2018



reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
    HI Leineco, so good to see you sweet girl...LOL...thank you for a wonderful review...I am so glad you enjoyed it...smiling back at you...love you...Linda xxoo
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Very clever graphic to go with the sweet words of the Autumn 5-7-5 Not only does it look like the family may be peering into a picture show, you even have the falling leaf - closer to our season than yours.

Nice phrasing in those first two lines and lovely alliteration in the last.

Steve


 Comment Written 20-Jan-2018



reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
    Hi Steve, thank you so much for a wonderful review...I am so glad you like it...love Linda xxoo
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Jeffrey L. Michaux
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You got this just right! The content of your work goes superbly with the artwork that I love for this poem. It all was obviously well thought out, well written, and well done.


 Comment Written 20-Jan-2018



reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
    Hi Jeff, thank you so much for a wonderful review...a am so glad you like it...God Bless...Linda xxoo
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mermaids
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Autumn is certainly a show with all her beauty and colors. Your last line impacts the reader, that last leaf does remind us of the end of Autumn and the arrival of winter, yet the beauty of Autumn will return.


 Comment Written 20-Jan-2018



reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
    HI Elaine, it truly is a beautiful season my sweet friend...thank you for a great review...I am so glad you like it...love ya Linda xxoo
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