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Teach our children stranger danger.


We must teach our children how to stay safe.

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Boogienights
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This is not only a excellent entry for the contest, but very good advice on how to protect our children. I must admit that I had never thought about a secret code for emergencies, what a great idea! I liked the picture you chose because it makes you think about how easy it could be for kids to be taken. Thank you for making us think.


 Comment Written 25-Jan-2018



reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
    Thanks Boogienights. That contest ended. Not enough votes to win 1st. I love your name. Become my fan. Look at bottom of my poem and click on "become a fan" and type in request when screen pops up. Thanks liberty justice
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This acrostic poem, Teach Our Children Stranger Danger, presented with the phrase WATCH YOUR CHILDREN, follows the vertical theme and is full of positive action for the reader to prevent anyone grabbing a child. Talk, call, hug, offer, understand, respect, check, heed, indicate, listen, and remember.


 Comment Written 24-Jan-2018



reply by the author on 24-Jan-2018
    Thanks for excellent review. Thanks for wishing me good luck in contest, Today! Well, other contest ended.
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Wow Liberty, you knocked my knickers off with this artistic acrostic and the sagacity of your advice and warning signals. The adorable photo lends sweet affinity to your poem. One suggestion: the green and red background rendition is squinty difficult to read, especially by old goats like me. You may wish to make it more visible. Otherwise, congratulations on this work of art and love. john


 Comment Written 24-Jan-2018



reply by the author on 24-Jan-2018
    Thanks for excellent review. Thanks for wishing me good luck in contest, Today!
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the most important thing is to listen to your children when they speak...and then they will listen to you...teach them about stranger danger...and not to talk or go up to a stranger for any reason...and all the other bad things going on in our world...very well written...and your picture speaks for itself...love Linda xxoo


 Comment Written 23-Jan-2018



reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018
    Hi Linds great review.

reply by l.raven on 23-Jan-2018
    hi...and thank you...xxoo love

reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018
    You're so welcome. Good luck to you, if you are in a contest, and thanks for supporting me, today.

reply by l.raven on 24-Jan-2018
    you are so very welcome...xxoo love
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This is an important message for parents and non-parents alike. I had these discussions with my children when they were younger, now that they are adults there are a whole new avenue of fears to tread. I found your work to be well written, engaging and very relevant. My only concern is that while it absolutely meets the structural criteria of an acrostic poem, it reads more like an essay. Which for me means I can't really discern the rhythm of the narrative for this work. That said, the importance of your work can not be undervalued.


 Comment Written 23-Jan-2018



reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018
    Hi! My acoustic poem is a free verse acoustic poem. Rules did not specify "any" particular form. Thanks for review. Did you read those astonishing statistics in my notes?

reply by NaughtieScribe on 23-Jan-2018
    Yes, I did read them. It is one of the reasons your work resonated with me. Frightening.

reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018
    You're so welcome. Good luck to you, if you are in a contest, and thanks for supporting me, today.
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A very well-written acrostic poem and very good advice on how to protect our children against danger and strangers. My children are all grown up now, but the focus shifted now to the grand children.


 Comment Written 23-Jan-2018



reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018
    Thanks Sandra, you are a great reviewer.
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I think this is a good entry for the Acrostic Poetry writing prompt.
Well written and well said. The message here is clear and a good one.
Good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon


 Comment Written 23-Jan-2018



reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018

    Thanks for your intellectual and important commentaries and excellent rating. So glad you appreciate my poem. Many parents don't follow all of these rules, and that is why half a million women, men, boys and girls turned up missing this past year. Thanks for supporting my poem; and, thanks for wishing me good luck in contest, Today!
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I have since around 1976, been a advocate of the statement, "Kids are people too." They are but are often not treated like people or given choices as they should be to make mistakes and learn from their lessons and sometimes adults forget that. Teaching kids right from wrong and who to trust is extremely important in today's world. Very nicely written and very informative. Good Luck and Best Wishes in the contest! Sherman


 Comment Written 23-Jan-2018



reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018
    Thanks Sherman for your intellectual and important commentaries and excellent rating.

    Thanks for your intellectual and important commentaries and excellent rating. So glad you appreciate my poem. Many parents don't follow all of these rules, and that is why half a million women, men, boys and girls turned up missing this past year. Thanks for supporting my poem about warnings; and, thanks for wishing me good luck in contest today!


    Thank you for supporting my poem about warnings to children.

reply by Sherman541 on 23-Jan-2018
    You are welcome and you are right - more parents should be present in the lives of their children. Again, Best of Luck :)

reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018
    You're so welcome. Good luck to you, if you are in a contest, and thanks for supporting me, today.

reply by Sherman541 on 24-Jan-2018
    Thank you as well :)
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This looks like an excellent entry to the acrostic poem prompt. A rather ambitious set of suggestions that would save a lot of grief, all grammatical and clear.


 Comment Written 23-Jan-2018



reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018
    Thanks for your intellectual and important commentaries and excellent rating. So glad you appreciate my poem.

    Thanks for your intellectual and important commentaries and excellent rating. So glad you appreciate my poem. Many parents don't follow all of these rules, and that is why half a million women, men, boys and girls turned up missing this past year. Thanks for supporting my poem; and, thanks for wishing me good luck in contest, Today!
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This is an acrostic warning poem well-written reach deep and seem as well as imagery it talks about the dangers and how there's over half a million people a year that turn up missing that are children which is a shame but as we both know there's a lot of creeps out there and we must always keep a close eye on our children I always say when mine were younger you don't just watch them every minute you watch them every second it just takes a split second to turn away and have somebody grab your kid and take that child away thanks for this well-written peace talk to Ricky 1024


 Comment Written 23-Jan-2018



reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018
    Thanks for your intellectual and important commentaries and excellent rating. So glad you appreciate my poem.

    Thanks for your intellectual and important commentaries and excellent rating. So glad you appreciate my poem. Many parents don't follow all of these rules, and that is why half a million women, men, boys and girls turned up missing this past year. Thanks for supporting my poem; and, thanks for wishing me good luck in contest, Today!
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