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Blessed for a second time

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A lovely honest Valentin's poetry verse entry to the contest. Some lovely images '' Ripples of love from across the ocean'' Nicely done and expressed. Good luck in the poetry contest.


 Comment Written 02-Feb-2018



reply by the author on 03-Feb-2018
    Thank you so much for your encouraging review and good wishes.
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This is a Valentine Contest Entree rich in Theme and imagery.
It flowed well and read well with no grammar issues as well.
Adjective Content was aligned well with Objective Content and Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
Good luck with this.
Dr Ricky 1024.Later today


 Comment Written 02-Feb-2018



reply by the author on 02-Feb-2018
    Thank you, Dr Ricky 1024. Your comments are much appreciated.

reply by the author on 02-Feb-2018
    Thank you, Dr Ricky 1024. Your comments are much appreciated.
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LIJ Red
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Sounds like the very stuff of a Valentine poem, a long distance love on the web that ends, as they say most good stories do, with a murder or a marriage. Excellent.


 Comment Written 01-Feb-2018



reply by the author on 02-Feb-2018
    Thank you. This Skype romance has become a very happy marriage. I am blessed. O

reply by the author on 02-Feb-2018
    Thank you. This Skype romance has become a very happy marriage. I am blessed. O
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Hi there;
Thank you for sharing this lovely story within a poem. A great tale for the Valentine Poetry contest. Is this based on truth? How wonderful! Finding love again is a true blessing,

~patty~


 Comment Written 01-Feb-2018



reply by the author on 02-Feb-2018
    Thank you, patty, for your warm comments. This is a true story.......we are happily married.

reply by Mustang Patty on 02-Feb-2018
    Congratulations - I'm very happy for you both

reply by the author on 02-Feb-2018
    Thank you, patty, for your warm comments. This is a true story.......we are happily married.
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Very good, and a lovely story to share.

Just a couple of minor corrections, but nothing of major import:

Second stanza, you've a small typo after 'knee' (space then comma, rather than the other way around).

Stanza three, line three, an unnecessary space before the first 'yes'.

Both insignificant in terms of the overall tale/message, of course :)

Great job, and thank you for sharing this. And, assuming it's non-fiction, congratulations :)

Take care.

-James


 Comment Written 01-Feb-2018



reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018
    Thank you, James, for your warm review and for taking the trouble to point out those punctuation errors.. The story is true, lucky me.
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A beautiful and romantic love story in a poem for Valentine's Day.
Lovely artwork to compliment your poem and congratulations on being blessed for a second time.

Well done.
Blessings
Janet


 Comment Written 01-Feb-2018



reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018
    Thank you, Janet. I count my blessings every day.
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A very well-written acrostic Valentine's poem. It happens more and more that people meet over the Internet and become great friends and even lovers willing to start their lives together.


 Comment Written 01-Feb-2018



reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018
    Thank you, Sandra. We courted over the internet but had met first, 60 years previously.
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True story? I hope so. This is a very nice love story told in a well written poem. I love bright colors so the image included caught my eye. It's wonderful to find love for a second time. Thanks for sharing.


 Comment Written 01-Feb-2018



reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018
    A true story indeed and I continue to count my blessings. Thank you for taking the trouble to read my acrostic poem.

reply by Boogienights on 01-Feb-2018
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If autobiological, there's quite an untold story behind this interesting poem. It didn't seem like it would end up being about Valentine's Day.

Nice work, Persevere.

Don (Ogden)


 Comment Written 01-Feb-2018



reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018
    Thank you Don. We were married 5 months after that Valentine?s Day and we find each 14 February as special as our anniversary .
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This is a beautiful poem. I love the romance of it. It's simple and sweet and full of emotion. The lines flow nicely and all in all it is filled with love. Well done.


 Comment Written 31-Jan-2018



reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018
    Thank you, Violet. I am blessed.
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