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Jungle Love


5-7-5 Valentine Contest

  21 total reviews 
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tbacha58
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Hi, what you wrote is so true, once in love is when we remain entwined. I hope you remember me, I left for 2 years and now I am back. Your writing is amazing and I love the greenery. Well done. Love Terry xoxo


 Comment Written 29-Dec-2018


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LIJ Red
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If you have ever tried to machete your way through a jungle, rain forest or swamp thicket in Georgia, this has real significance. Excellent 5/7/5. Missed it earlier.


 Comment Written 22-Feb-2018



reply by the author on 22-Feb-2018
    Thanks Red for reviewing this for 2 cents:)
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Lulube
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great imagery using a vine to visualize the heart, mind and spirit. Cleverly thought out/ Love the lush, green photo that you used/ Good luck in the contest

lulube


 Comment Written 17-Feb-2018



reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
    Thank you:)

reply by Lulube on 07-Mar-2018
    I just got my account 10 minutes ago. I'll be reading ya

    lulube

reply by the author on 07-Mar-2018
    yea for you!
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How beautifully written! I love the idea, the illustration, and your chosen colors. The rhyming is perfect! I enjoyed this one ??? You always have a way of brightening up the day.


 Comment Written 17-Feb-2018



reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018
    Thank you so much!
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honeytree
 
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The art work is
great for these words written
I guess our body could be
like a jungle love to see the action
with my eyes what our body really does.

Honey tree


 Comment Written 15-Feb-2018



reply by the author on 15-Feb-2018
    thank you Annie:)
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rama devi
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Sweet, simple and effective. Lovely love poem for V-day. I like the echo of rhyme in this fine 5-7-5. Good simile! Creative! Good luck.

Love,
rd


 Comment Written 15-Feb-2018



reply by the author on 15-Feb-2018
    Thank you RD for saying this is creative:)

reply by rama devi on 15-Feb-2018
    :-)))
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Yes, this lovely and unique Valentine says everything one needs to know about the unique engagement of those minds, hearts and spirits who are entwined until the end of time. A lovely and apt image Teresa and I wish you all good luck with a most authentic fiveseventyfive.

Gloria


 Comment Written 14-Feb-2018



reply by the author on 15-Feb-2018
    Thank you so much Gloria:)
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Leineco
 
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purrrrrfect! What better sentiment to send a lover
than this :-)

"forever entwined" would make for the ultimate engraving
inside a pair of wedding rings!

VERY nicely done Teresa :-)


 Comment Written 14-Feb-2018



reply by the author on 15-Feb-2018
    Thank you so much Lorraine for the six star review:)
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zanya
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OH-OH how lovely - encapturing the essence of a love-filled life 'hearts,minds, spirits'- in this succinct format and with a lovely simile to enhance plus a nice pic


 Comment Written 14-Feb-2018



reply by the author on 15-Feb-2018
    Thank you so much :)
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Joan E.
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I enjoyed your clever "jungle vine" simile and theme for this 5-7-5 Valentine poem. Your picture selection and use of the matching color is quite appealing. Best wishes in the contest and for a splendid, special day- Joan


 Comment Written 14-Feb-2018



reply by the author on 15-Feb-2018
    Thank you so much Joan:)
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