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Jungle Love

5-7-5 Valentine Contest

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tbacha58

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Hi, what you wrote is so true, once in love is when we remain entwined. I hope you remember me, I left for 2 years and now I am back. Your writing is amazing and I love the greenery. Well done. Love Terry xoxo

Comment Written 29-Dec-2018

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If you have ever tried to machete your way through a jungle, rain forest or swamp thicket in Georgia, this has real significance. Excellent 5/7/5. Missed it earlier.

Comment Written 22-Feb-2018

reply by the author on 22-Feb-2018

Thanks Red for reviewing this for 2 cents:)

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great imagery using a vine to visualize the heart, mind and spirit. Cleverly thought out/ Love the lush, green photo that you used/ Good luck in the contest

lulube

Comment Written 17-Feb-2018

reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018

Thank you:)

reply by Lulube on 07-Mar-2018

I just got my account 10 minutes ago. I'll be reading ya

lulube

reply by the author on 07-Mar-2018

yea for you!

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LoannaLois

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How beautifully written! I love the idea, the illustration, and your chosen colors. The rhyming is perfect! I enjoyed this one �??? You always have a way of brightening up the day.

Comment Written 17-Feb-2018

reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018

Thank you so much!

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honeytree

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The art work is
great for these words written
I guess our body could be
like a jungle love to see the action
with my eyes what our body really does.

Honey tree

Comment Written 15-Feb-2018

reply by the author on 15-Feb-2018

thank you Annie:)

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rama devi

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Sweet, simple and effective. Lovely love poem for V-day. I like the echo of rhyme in this fine 5-7-5. Good simile! Creative! Good luck.

Love,
rd

Comment Written 15-Feb-2018

reply by the author on 15-Feb-2018

Thank you RD for saying this is creative:)

reply by rama devi on 15-Feb-2018

:-)))

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Yes, this lovely and unique Valentine says everything one needs to know about the unique engagement of those minds, hearts and spirits who are entwined until the end of time. A lovely and apt image Teresa and I wish you all good luck with a most authentic fiveseventyfive.

Gloria

Comment Written 14-Feb-2018

reply by the author on 15-Feb-2018

Thank you so much Gloria:)

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Leineco

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purrrrrfect! What better sentiment to send a lover
than this :-)

"forever entwined" would make for the ultimate engraving
inside a pair of wedding rings!

VERY nicely done Teresa :-)

Comment Written 14-Feb-2018

reply by the author on 15-Feb-2018

Thank you so much Lorraine for the six star review:)

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OH-OH how lovely - encapturing the essence of a love-filled life 'hearts,minds, spirits'- in this succinct format and with a lovely simile to enhance plus a nice pic

Comment Written 14-Feb-2018

reply by the author on 15-Feb-2018

Thank you so much :)

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Joan E.

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I enjoyed your clever "jungle vine" simile and theme for this 5-7-5 Valentine poem. Your picture selection and use of the matching color is quite appealing. Best wishes in the contest and for a splendid, special day- Joan

Comment Written 14-Feb-2018

reply by the author on 15-Feb-2018

Thank you so much Joan:)

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