I thought this was wonderfully scary, which I love. I also enjoy your special effects and wish I could do that. You are a master of writing about horror and the supernatural, of which I am also a fan. Thanks for sharing.
I always enjoy reading you with all of your fantastic alliteration (dark demons, whispers waft, for fear, constant consternation, maim and maul, etc)
I see this poor soul, his eyes wide, awaiting his fate.
Well done,sir. Well done.
Perfect music to move on with the pace of the poem. The artwork accomplishes the same. You have a huge vocabulary that you dip into to keep from ever being repetitive. love the pairing of vapid void and maim and maul.
so you took a temporary journey to Hades (hell)
and decided then when you saw light in a Harbor and asked for help (from God) not to further your trip to the depths of hell.
Yes, I like how you mixed your rhyme pattern with your excellent meter.