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Harbor of Hades

My sojourn across the River Styx

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seken58

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Exceptional

This work has reached the exceptional level

Hi Dean,
An amazing poem and overall presentation.
You do have a way of bringing the darkness alive both in your written words and the skill shown in the overall presentation.
As always it is a privilege to read work of such quality.
:-) Shirley

Comment Written 18-Feb-2018

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Amy Rowell

Exceptional

Wow! Presentation and visual impact are both impressive. Wonderful photos you used to compliment your spooky piece! Nice flow and rhyme! Very interesting, creative and unique. I'm not usually a fan of dark pieces but I do love this one! So, I had to give it a 6! Very well done! Thanks for sharing, Amy

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Another super WOW! from this endlessly amazing author of darkness and gloom that can at any time with pen in hand, bring a monster into any room! If not just a monster, a raging sky or sea, will chill or fry the skin and bones off of you and me! Thanks again for a wild adventure Deano~! you are the best in the business!! HIS GRAYNESS(just now a bit darker}! Vance

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Hi Dean,
Love the poem. Very atmospheric imagery and when you add the pictures and music, fantastic. Keep up the good writing. Regards and best wishes, Shawlyn.

Comment Written 18-Feb-2018

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Thanks for the R&R, Shawlyn.
I appreciate your comments.

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This is absolutely phenomenal and sent chills up my spine. It flows superbly and the rhyme is spot on. I love all your poem, even the dark one. As always, I love the marvelous artistic presentation of this one too

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Hi Dean,
You don't need me to tell you how perfect this poem reads all the right ingredients for a perfect horror story. I could hear the waves licking at the harbour walls as the fog horns give of a ghostly wail in the foggy distance, and the gulls squawking in anticipation of impending doom. As always I love your horror poems. I will truly miss you when you leave.
Brenda:))X

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This is a good one, Dean. It reminds me of the scenes they show in movies about Hercules and also Pirates of the Caribbean. Start Trek Voyager even had a similar thing for the klingons. Good pictures that set the mood of the underworld.

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Thanks for the R&R, Joy.
I appreciate your comments.

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I am not a fan of dark poetry, but I am a fan of your wonderful God gifted talent. Does that make sense? Once again, you out did your self. Thank you for sharing.

Comment Written 18-Feb-2018

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Thanks for the R&R, Barbara.
I appreciate your comments.

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N.K. Wagner

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Particularly creepy, Dean. Full of foreboding without anything horrible actually happening ... yet. You might want to change one of your "vapid"s in the fourth stanza to something else, but that's the only improvement I can think of. Great job, sir. :) Nancy

Comment Written 18-Feb-2018

reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018

Thanks for the R&R, Nancy, and I will look into making the switch.
I sincerely appreciate your comments.

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Sharon Haiste

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You had me at the tile on this one, Dean.
Nicely done. Good rhythm, nicely rhymed.
There is no doubt of the meaning of your verse.
A well told story.
Well done.
Sharon

Comment Written 18-Feb-2018

reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018

Thanks for the R&R, Sharon.
I appreciate your comments.

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