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Hi Dean, this is a very well written piece with good abab rhyme, with some good wording - spawned/beyond, squall/maul, etc. Very much in your style, but you do not usually personalize in this way. 'This boundless sea, has it no end? Oars beat, to no avail.' I like that line - not meant to arrive. 'A poem written just for the helluvit.'
LOL - thank goodness. A good poem, well written. Regards Dorothy x
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Comment Written 19-Feb-2018 |
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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
Thank you very much for reading and reviewing the poem, Dorothy.
I appreciate your comments.
Enjoy your day,
~Dean
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