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Our Voices Demand Justice


Americans want justice for crimes

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Joan E.
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Thank you for sharing your political 5-7-5 and the photograph of four living presidents. Your demand that we, the people, be listened to is very compelling. Best wishes in the contest- Joan


 Comment Written 04-Mar-2018



reply by the author on 04-Mar-2018
    Thanks Joan for great stars. That contest ended a while back, but I appreciate the review. liberty justice lol
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This political 5-7-5, Voices Demand Justice, has the correct format and with full caps demands that politicians make the changes that end the senseless killing.


 Comment Written 26-Feb-2018



reply by the author on 26-Feb-2018
    Thanks for the excellent 5 star rating you gave me and compassionate review. Thanks for wishing me good luck in contest, today! lol liberty justice
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c_lucas
 
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Politicians fighting for their constitutionalists is out of style. Today's politician fights only to keep his office. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a good read.


 Comment Written 25-Feb-2018



reply by the author on 26-Feb-2018
    Thanks for the excellent 5 star rating you gave me and compassionate review. Thanks for wishing me good luck in contest, today! lol liberty justice

reply by c_lucas on 26-Feb-2018
    You're welcome.
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Debbie Pope
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Excellent poem for the political commentary category. Where did that photo come from? I can't imagine all of those presidents together. Perfect photo for your words. Good luck in the competition.


 Comment Written 25-Feb-2018



reply by the author on 26-Feb-2018
    I googled photo. Thanks for the excellent 5 star rating you gave me and compassionate review. Thanks for wishing me good luck in contest, today! lol liberty justice
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I am not an American citizen yet but I am a legitimate US immigrant granted only last January 2018. But I share your conservative views, I love your President and have been following his journey from the time he announced his candidacy until today. Yes, those who conspired to take him down and those who committed crimes against the Americans must pay for what they did. Keep writing.


 Comment Written 25-Feb-2018



reply by the author on 26-Feb-2018
    Congrats on your American citizenship? Are you DACA or permanent citizenship, now?
    Thanks for the excellent 5 star rating you gave me and compassionate review. Thanks for wishing me good luck in contest, today! lol liberty justice
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Excellent poem, my friend. I agree. Our leaders seem to be too busy on Twitter etc to actually--lead. Unfortunately, these problems can't be tweeted away. Best wishes in the contest, my friend. Nice protest in a few syllables (less than a tweet)~Debbie


 Comment Written 25-Feb-2018



reply by the author on 26-Feb-2018
    Thanks for the excellent 5 star rating you gave me and compassionate review. Thanks for wishing me good luck in contest, today! lol liberty justice
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rspoet
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This is an excellent 5-7-5 political poem and entry for the contest
Sadly, special interest groups with big money
control political representatives, senators and many others
If they get voted out, maybe the rest would start to listen
Good luck with your entry
RS



 Comment Written 25-Feb-2018



reply by the author on 26-Feb-2018
    Thanks for the excellent 5 star rating you gave me and compassionate review. Thanks for wishing me good luck in contest, today! lol liberty justice
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Sharon Haiste
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I think this is a good entry for the Political 5-7-5 writing prompt.
Well said in so few well chosen words.
Well done and good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon


 Comment Written 25-Feb-2018



reply by the author on 26-Feb-2018
    Thanks for the excellent 5 star rating you gave me and compassionate review. Thanks for wishing me good luck in contest, today! lol liberty justice
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jenintorre
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I think this is a very good entry for the political Haiku contest. It makes such good sense.
You have said it how it is in very few words. Great photo. Good luck in the competition.


 Comment Written 25-Feb-2018



reply by the author on 26-Feb-2018
    Thanks for the excellent 5 star rating you gave me and compassionate review. Thanks for wishing me good luck in contest, today! lol liberty justice
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RodG
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I like the fact that the people are speaking with a SINGLE voice for justice. Although it's never said what kind of "Justice" they are speaking of,it's implied they want (stricter laws, (2) better enforcement of those we have, and (3) stiffer penalties for crimes like the massacre in Florida.


 Comment Written 25-Feb-2018



reply by the author on 26-Feb-2018
    Thanks for the excellent 5 star rating you gave me and compassionate review. Thanks for wishing me good luck in contest, today! lol liberty justice
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