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Ageless and Evergreen


A quiet salvation ( No Voice Audio)

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Oddly enough, the title you use is one of my all-time favorite songs, and one I enjoyed singing too. I say 'oddly' because I've not been onsite a lot, and I am lagging far behind with members who've recently reviewed for me, but somehow you crossed my mind, even though we haven't 'spoken' in a while... :))

As always, dear Roy - magnificent. Six stars, all across the screen, though at this late date, the real ones won't help promote this at all (so I'll save the six for the one it will help, yes?) Bravo, and best of luck in the contest.


 Comment Written 24-Mar-2018



reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
    Thank you, Dawn for going back to this.
    My best wishes.
    Have a great Sunday
    RG

reply by Ideasaregems-Dawn on 25-Mar-2018
    You're most welcome. I am not onsite much anymore.
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Hi, RG

Not sure how I missed this poem, but I'm glad to now give you a review. As always, your writing, imagery and concepts are beautiful and touching. For instance here:

'So harsh the path where concrete blocks replace flowers,
and beauty like ash,
wither...forgotten...'

The spiritual aspects of this poem ring so true for the season of Easter, and move this reader's heart with its message of ultimate hope and grace.

All the best,

Bev



 Comment Written 20-Mar-2018



reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018
    Thank you so much for going back to this and spending your six stars, Bev. Always good to see your name.

    Hope all is well.
    My very best wishes.
    RG

reply by Writingfundimension on 21-Mar-2018
    My pleasure, RG. XX Bev
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"A love, ageless and evergreen is very beautiful. Verses flow with musical accents as vivid descriptions of a lovely romance and loved one is given a true testimonial. Truly! liberty justice


 Comment Written 13-Mar-2018



reply by the author on 14-Mar-2018
    Thank you, Liberty. Thank you so much. I appreciate your time.
    Have a wonderful day.
    RG
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Fantastic. This poem has an energy that pulses through it and encourages it to be read and read again. Very strong vocab with flow and meaning and creativity all intertwined. Very impressive! I loved it!
Wendy


 Comment Written 13-Mar-2018



reply by the author on 14-Mar-2018
    Thank you so much, Wendy, brought a smile to my face with your enthusiasm. Eternally grateful.
    Thank you so much for the six stars.
    My very best wishes.
    RG
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Excellent Poem! The words of this poem are just beautiful. The
author's words are spiritual, creative, heartfelt and thought provoking.
The author was able to touch my heart with these words. The artwork
is perfect and compliments both the theme and words of this poem.


 Comment Written 13-Mar-2018



reply by the author on 14-Mar-2018
    Thank you, Harmony. Good to hear your voice in support.
    Thank you for the lovely words.
    My very best wishes.
    RG
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-Very nice image.
-Notes are appreciated.
-A very well penned poem, RG,
beginning and ending with the title.
-The poem flows very well.
-Excellent imagery as you take
us through this person's journey
from dark to enlightenment:
* "So harsh the path where concrete blocks replace flowers"
* "Around him, formed new buds of the rose"
-Very nice conclusion.
-I hope you do very well in the contest;
it is deserved,my friend.


 Comment Written 13-Mar-2018



reply by the author on 13-Mar-2018
    Yes, Pam. You with the golden heart, the line of the rose would always be a favorite. Thank you so much.
    Thank you, too for the six stars, and the support about the release of the poem in its construction.
    Always good to hear from you.
    My best wishes.
    RG

reply by Pam (respa) on 13-Mar-2018
    You are very welcome and deserving of the review and stars, RG. I appreciate your compliment about my choice of the rose line. You are always welcome for the support.
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Hello RG,
A beautiful poem, your use of sound is superb.
I'm always curious about the cause of the turn:
"Then, that guiding light,"
so that others may also find their path.
Was it an actual light, a realization,
a person - friend, teacher, counselor...
something as simple and beautiful as a sunrise
or something as complex as a thought.
Or is it somehow unknown, and unknowable
and happens in its own time and place,
"a love, ageless and evergreen."
Whatever it is, I'm glad it came for you, my friend
Best wishes!
Robert


 Comment Written 13-Mar-2018



reply by the author on 13-Mar-2018
    Absolutely correct, for there are many paths to true love, even though the one here given is of faith, and you hit the nail on the head, for it is that also that must be conveyed, and part the emphasis of the poem.
    Thank you author, as well the six stars.
    Best wishes. Congrats on your POM win once more, a fine poem..
    RG
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This is a beautiful piece of poetry dear rg! I love how you juxtapose the good and evil. And just life and death itself. You touch deeply with your poem and make an impact on this old filly :)
Thanks for sharing!
Blessings and a big squeeze!
Rebekka x


 Comment Written 13-Mar-2018



reply by the author on 13-Mar-2018
    Hi, Rebekka. Big squeeze back. Thank you. Strong the imagery that is endless.
    My very best wishes, and thank you for the six stars.
    Have a great day.
    RG
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Sad, infused with imagery and glimpses of nature throughout a long path towards salvation, but in the end the light overcomes the darkness... very nice work, but in line 15 I noticed the spelling of "wither"... does not need the "h". Hope you don't mind the critique but I have done a lot of editing and it jumps out at me. Beautiful picture.


 Comment Written 13-Mar-2018



reply by the author on 13-Mar-2018
    Don't mind? Oh author, absolutely adore. Went past it so many times and not a thought, though I use the word often in writing. Thank you so much. Perhaps others thought I would notice it...just wasn't checking. Excellent find...thank you, and thanks for the support.
    My best wishes.
    RGstar

reply by cailinraine8 on 13-Mar-2018
    You are very welcome! Glad I could help :)
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Congratulations on this superb and thought-provoking work of literary art, fully deserving of Fanstory's accolades. The photo adds affinity to this masterpiece.


 Comment Written 13-Mar-2018



reply by the author on 13-Mar-2018
    Thank you, JP. My very best today, and thank you for the support.

    RGstar
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