The Train of Life
The daily dirge catches up with my thoughts
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A similar feeling.

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Joan E.
 
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I needed a good laugh. Thanks for reminding me that we used to describe an orgasm as being like a sneeze! I must add that I did not expect your punch line. Good luck in this fun senryu contest- Joan


 Comment Written 18-Mar-2018



reply by the author on 30-Mar-2018
    Glad it gave you a smile.
    Thanks for reviewing.
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Dean Kuch
 
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Hahaha. The artwork is priceless and fits the narrative and context of the poem so well, Anonymous Poet
Excellent, very funny.


 Comment Written 17-Mar-2018



reply by the author on 30-Mar-2018
    Thanks, Dean
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Oh dear, there's not a lot that makes us feel quite so disappointed and frustrated, is there? HAHAHAHAHA! I never used to sneeze like I do now - it comes in groupings, sometimes as many as a dozen at a time! ROFL at the artwork you chose too.


 Comment Written 16-Mar-2018



reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
    Thanks for the review. Unable to get that sneeze out is like unable to reach a climax..If I remember correctly. Lol
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Complex wording for such a simple act. Intellectual viewpoints... Spffft. Great C-word alliteration. Memorable poem, especially satori line. Great work. Good luck :)


 Comment Written 16-Mar-2018



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    thank you for the kind review.
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wow what a photo!!! lol!!! aborted sneeze, well what a fun write and i hope the best in the contest it was a pleasure to read your work. comment made from donette1914 on march 16th 2018


 Comment Written 16-Mar-2018



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    Thanks for the kind review.
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Haha very nice. I like the image you created here, and the picture with it is amazing by itself. Thanks for sharing this great poem and have yourself a really great day


 Comment Written 16-Mar-2018



reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
    Thanks for the kind review.
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A sneeze going up the nose instead of out is a bit uncomfortable! A twisted expression indeed, best of luck with the contest, best wishes, love Dolly x


 Comment Written 16-Mar-2018



reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
    Thanks for the kind review.
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Hah! Well so it does...and we didn't need Masters or Johnson to figure it out! An oddball humor that tickles my fancy! Great photo as well! Not every poem has to be "Invictus"----

(Thank goodness)

Karenina


 Comment Written 16-Mar-2018



reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
    Ha ha...You got it. Thanks for the review.
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I think this is a good entry for the Make Us Laugh writing prompt.
Well written and well said, but the picture is kind of scary.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon


 Comment Written 16-Mar-2018



reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
    Thanks for the kind review. Glad it brought a smile.
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