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A Pocket


short love poem

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This love poem, A Pocket, fits into my life just right too. I never realize until I consider a poem like this, how much less I am without her.


 Comment Written 15-Mar-2019


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Hello Tab, Short but the feelings in that verse tells the story of true love. Your amazing description of true love living in your heart gives the happiness of sharing a whole life time with that person. Good luck. Terry xoxo
I do hope you remember me, as i was away for 2 years due to health problems.


 Comment Written 20-Oct-2018


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I see you haven't been on here for awhile. Are you okay? just thought I'd drop a line incase you check in on here. btw this is such a sweet thing to say, you really are full of emotions for the one you love.

lulube


 Comment Written 14-Aug-2018


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honeytree
 
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This work has reached the exceptional level
Very interesting to read
in everyway we miss
those we love so dearly
in everyday each day.
To carry something like this in
a pocket is great in every way.

Honeytree


 Comment Written 22-Mar-2018



reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018
    Thank you Annie for all the sparkling stars:)
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LOL - this is so cute...such a nice sentiment...yet I
couldn't help but remember an illustration I once saw
of Jack & the Beanstalk, where Jack was being lifted
by giant fingers and dangling (by the scruff of his shirt)
as Mrs. Beanstalk was conveying him to her shirt pocket.

LOL - it was an X rated comic book...which got me thinking
about the....never mind........LMAO





 Comment Written 21-Mar-2018



reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018
    lol:) thanks Loraine. How are you?
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Such a lovely sentiment, Teresa. The wording clear, the love clear and the pocket of course can be the metaphor for the heart.

I very much enjoy the lean, clean lines of this delightful love poem.

Best wishes to you in the contest.

Gloria


 Comment Written 21-Mar-2018



reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018
    Thank you Gloria:)
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That's one lucky lady dwelling in your heart; a wonderful ditty in simple down to earth vocabulary that's quite meaningful; thanks for the treat and good luck!


 Comment Written 20-Mar-2018



reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018
    I'm the lucky one to have her:) Thanks so much for the review.
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Very good. I think we do carry our loved one(s) with us when we aren't with them, constantly thinking about them. Much luck in the contest with this cute entry. Marilyn


 Comment Written 20-Mar-2018



reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018
    Thank you so much Marilyn:)
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What an endearing way to express your love! Your "wife-sized pocket" is memorable and comparing the feeling to "home" is heartwarming. Best wishes in the Love Poem Contest. Big cheers--save this one for next Valentine's Day- Joan


 Comment Written 20-Mar-2018



reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018
    Thank you Joan:)
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Awwwwe, Teresa, this is just too sweet. Just imagine to be able to carry your loved one in a pocket at all times. It's a great entry for the contest. I really enjoyed to read your poem. Good luck. All the best. Ulla:)))


 Comment Written 20-Mar-2018



reply by the author on 20-Mar-2018
    Thank you Ulla:)
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