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Raffaelina Lowcock
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True love sings throughout this poem and lingers in the reader's heart as a poignantly whispered secret and the author's note is preciously written: "Dedicated to My Lynie". The capitalization of My tells a story of devotion. And, picture perfect!


 Comment Written 27-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 27-Oct-2019
    Thanks so much for your stars and your comments, my dear friend. :) Bob
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Tina Crute
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This is just precious. I love the bright colors which, to me, represent passion and thrill that you speak of in your poem. This is well-written by a man who is obviously in love." Like velvet melodies of mercy", is my favorite line because it is a smooth, lovely way I'm saying how grateful you are for your true love :-)


 Comment Written 16-May-2019



reply by the author on 16-May-2019
    Thank you so much, Tina. Bless you. Bob
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Sandra Montanino
 
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So you are a poet, also?? Such a talent you are. What a great romantic poem. Bet your wife was really appreciative. You even gave her an air of mystery. I can see you winning this contest. Best of luck!!


 Comment Written 16-May-2019



reply by the author on 16-May-2019
    Thank you so much, Sanda. :) Bob
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Jeffrey L. Michaux
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That is the mystery of Love, isn't it? When it seems like we think we know all that their is to know, then, something new sprouts and blossoms. I love the message of this and enjoyed reading this well written work. Well done!


 Comment Written 16-May-2019



reply by the author on 16-May-2019
    Thank you, my friend. I appreciate your opinion. Bob

reply by Jeffrey L. Michaux on 16-May-2019
    You are welcome my friend. It's good to see you!
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Jennifer Major-Byers
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Keeping mystery, surprise and excitement in a relationship is key if the couple is to thrive and grow ever closer together. Your poem shows this as a beautiful opportunity and not the hard work and struggle some allow it to become. A missed chance to be with your one love can be a devastating realization as you mentioned in your notes. Well written and much enjoyed by this reader. Thank you for your share, Jennifer


 Comment Written 16-Jun-2018



reply by the author on 16-Jun-2018
    Thank you for your review, Jen...and your insights as well. :) Bob
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prettybluebirds
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You have caught the magic of love in this poem. It is beautiful and well-done. The artwork is perfect for the subject of the writing. Best of luck in the contest.


 Comment Written 02-May-2018



reply by the author on 02-May-2018
    Thanks so much, April. I appreciate your time and the comments. Bob
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fluffnstuff
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wow and an all time best at that. well how wonderful that is and i congratulate you too. you are definitely a master at what you do, with an appropriate name to go with it. fluff


 Comment Written 01-May-2018



reply by the author on 02-May-2018
    Thanks so much,my friend. Actually my user name is a rather weird story. Way back when I joined up in 2004 I sat in front of my pc and pondered a user name to sign up with. I thennoticed a padlock sitting in my incoming tray on my desk. It was a "Master" and so forlack of anything better at that time I clled myself "Mastery" LOL...Blessings. Bob

reply by fluffnstuff on 02-May-2018
    gots to love it....great name and how you got it. i won't tell....lol fluff
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w.j.debi
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Your free verse demonstrates the wonderful freeing feeling of love. Nice alliteration in the ending to tie it up so nicely and add the special pizzazz that adds the additional thrill to love

magnificent mystery

Nice to see you around, Bob.


 Comment Written 01-May-2018



reply by the author on 01-May-2018
    Thanks so much, Deb. Yeah,I wasoff about ssix months will health issues. Good to be back. Bob
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IndianaIrish
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A lovely free verse poem, Bob, and the emotion is moving and beautifully written. Your note is so true...life is short and you never know when the day might come when you can't hold tight anymore to your love. Loved your last verse.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)


 Comment Written 30-Apr-2018



reply by the author on 30-Apr-2018
    Thanks so much, Karyn. You are such a good fan. Bob
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Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written poem, the one we love should always surprise us when we least expect it to keep the relationship lively and full of surprises. It keep both on their toes to never know exactly what the other's reaction is going to be.


 Comment Written 29-Apr-2018



reply by the author on 29-Apr-2018
    Thanks so much, Sandra. Bob
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