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'Belle'


Unfashionable love (a mono rhymed poem) audio by the author

  45 total reviews 
Comment by
w.j.debi
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Love the last line, "Life is never sung from a single song." Yet, there are some moments that will linger in the memory far longer than the rest.
I love how you play and tease with words. It is always a delight to read because you do it so artistically. Throughout there is alliteration, wonderful meter and excellent imagery.


 Comment Written 22-Jun-2018



reply by the author on 23-Jun-2018
    Thank you my friend. A pleasure to hear from you.
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Pamusart
 
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Hi RG. This one is worthy of six stars. Describes what a man goes through to resist wrong urges and stay true to Belle. This is the part I liked best. Thank you for sharing


 Comment Written 20-May-2018



reply by the author on 21-May-2018
    Thank you. Just coming back. Thank you for thesis stars.
    Best wishes.
    RG
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Absolutely beautiful, RG. Alliteration, assonance and occasional internal rhymes make this poignant monorhyme musical. Outstanding work, sir. :) Nancy


 Comment Written 18-May-2018



reply by the author on 21-May-2018
    Thank you, NK. Just coming back. Thank you so much for the six stars.
    My best wishes.
    RG
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misscookie
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I'm so behind
Please forgive Me
I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem
its a perfect match
You captured my attention from the first line to the last I had to smile thinking some day some young man will think about my great grand daughter the same way she is six tears old and is taking BALLET LESSON NOW
Mama Cookie


 Comment Written 18-May-2018



reply by the author on 21-May-2018
    Thank you Mamacookie. Just coming back.
    Thanks for the super six.
    Best wishes.
    RG

reply by misscookie on 22-May-2018
    You are very welcome
    Peace be with you and yours
    Cookie
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tbacha58
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Hi Roy, as i told u I am trying to come back, but i find it so hard to concentrate as before. You are the first for me to read your usual beautiful warm poem. I loved it, and also the roses inbetween each paragraphe are so beautiful. Love u son. Terry xoxo


 Comment Written 17-May-2018



reply by the author on 21-May-2018
    So good to see you back. Now take it easy and just review when you can, and ease back slowly and take care of your health. That is the important thing.
    I'll be right here in support little mum.
    Thanks for the super six.
    My best wishes.
    RG x
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Your work makes me feel rather inadequate, RG, in doing it justice. For one thing I really I'm an illiterate when it comes to poetry, despite my love of them to read or wuote in my prose.

This work had so much passion, such emotional force that it sent my imagination careening way out there. You wouldn't believe the images in my mind when I read this:

We, like horses wild; bucked, reared and raged with hooves aflame
Nostrils flared, sweat awashed--galloped without shame
Sweet whispered lies, such her guile, yet, I voice no blame
Moistened lips--my Jezebel, proud in all but name

Hoping you will accept me what what I am and will be; even have been, lol.

Unfortunately I'm out of sixes, but you get my virtual one.


 Comment Written 16-May-2018



reply by the author on 21-May-2018
    Thanks Apky...just coming back.
    Thanks for the heads up. Hope all is well.
    My very best to you,
    RG
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Jmf4119
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Belle is a beautiful girl and this is a beautiful poem filled with sensual imagery.
A glorious picture to perfect picture to compliment your work. Very emotional -an exquisite read. I especially liked the line, ""Life is not sung by a single song." This is so profoud and so very true.

Well done my friend.

Blessings
Janet



 Comment Written 16-May-2018



reply by the author on 21-May-2018
    Hey Janet. Just on my way back. Thank you so much. Hope life finds you well.
    Thank you so much for the six stars. Always a pleasure to hear from you.
    My best wishes.
    RG
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Pam (respa)
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-Nice image and presentation.
-Notes appreciated.
-A nicely penned poem, RG,
with effective rhyme, imagery,
and portrayal of Belle.
-All of these elements and more
tell a story about her.
-Excellent descriptions about her:
"Flavoured her lips; like mint, rose and thyme.,"
but isn't necessarily going to stay long.
-The conclusion ends the poem well.


 Comment Written 16-May-2018



reply by the author on 21-May-2018
    Hi, Pam. Just on my way back.
    Thank you so much for your never ending support.
    Always good t hear your word.
    My best wishes.
    RG

reply by Pam (respa) on 14-Jun-2018
    I appreciate the reply, RG. I haven?t been on FS for a while because of a few health issues. However, I am fine now. It will take a little time to get back into FS, but I look forward to it. Your friend, Pam.

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rspoet
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Hello RG,
A cornucopia of imagery flows down the page
As you probably remember, I'm not a fan of the mono-rhyme
though yours works pretty well in Belle
I'm sure other will feel differently
I could not get the sound, but went to classic and it was there
It has always appeared in the past, so not sure why it's not there now
This is vintage RG
RS


 Comment Written 16-May-2018



reply by the author on 21-May-2018
    Yes, I am not sure if browsers are picking up the majority as it may be part of the site address as recognise only secure, so somethings not registering as that won't get through.
    Sometimes it works sometimes not, but on Classic it works.
    Best wishes.
    RG
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LIJ Red
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Excellent word choices, uniform lines, and the monorhymed stanzas make this an excellent poetic post. No, one should not pass by a rose if he only has time for one sniff...


 Comment Written 15-May-2018



reply by the author on 21-May-2018
    Thank you LIJ
    My very best wishes.
    Hope time finds you well.
    My best wishes.
    RG
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