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The moment


May we never waste it.

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Ideasaregems-Dawn
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WOW!!! I should have a six for this sweet ode, short or not! It's fabulous - carpe diem for sure, and man oh man, this inspires me! I am longing to be OUT today! What a great poem - THIS is exceptional use of the poet's tools and devices, IMHO! Best of luck in the booth.


 Comment Written 10-May-2018



reply by the author on 10-May-2018
    Thanks for the great review.

reply by Ideasaregems-Dawn on 10-May-2018
    My pleasure!
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You have my thumbs up. Good luck! Your poem is very interesting and gives testimonial to something very much loved and needed for happiness. Well done. liberty justice


 Comment Written 07-May-2018



reply by the author on 10-May-2018
    Thank you.
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I admired your personifying time and exhorting us not to waste any bit of it. Of course, I enjoyed your use of alliteration and cleo85's artwork. Best wishes in the competition and relish the remains of Sunday- Joan


 Comment Written 06-May-2018



reply by the author on 10-May-2018
    Thanks, Joan.
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Sharon Haiste
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I think this is a good entry for the Ode Poem writing prompt.
A lovely ode to The Moment.
Well done and good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon


 Comment Written 06-May-2018



reply by the author on 10-May-2018
    Thank you, Sharon.
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Cindy McIntyre
 
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A great response to the writing prompt, Ode Poem. "Siphon every single drop!" I really loved that line. What a well-written poem. A well-written piece and a good entry to the contest.


 Comment Written 06-May-2018



reply by the author on 10-May-2018
    thanks you for the kind review.
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Many will relate to your ode about living in the moment
for that is the only place we are
and opportunity is all around us, if we are open to it
Excellent use of alliteration in your free verse poem
Excellent art work, too
Well done
Good luck in the contest
RS


 Comment Written 05-May-2018



reply by the author on 10-May-2018
    Thank you for the kind review.
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"The Moment" poem is nicely written and it makes you think about not wasting a moment in time for love. well, you say, your "hope".

Powerful words, "Hope, Opportunity, Serenity, and Elixir (Magical) were used in this poem. I love them. Great ending line, saying you don't want to lose that gift. Your Hope for the gift of the things above is clearly shown in your poem. You have a good structural flow of words. Good Job!! Thanks


 Comment Written 05-May-2018



reply by the author on 10-May-2018
    Thank you for the positive, detailed review.
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An ode to the moment, nicely done. Moments are precious and should never waste one. good luck on this and have a great day.


 Comment Written 05-May-2018



reply by the author on 10-May-2018
    Thank you for reviewing.
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This is what people are created to mean to each other. The saddest thing on earth is the person who is alone and doesn't even know what is missing. A person alone is not a complete human being. For this cause shall two become one.


 Comment Written 05-May-2018



reply by the author on 10-May-2018
    Thank you for reviewing.
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Harry Smith
 
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This is a very interesting picture for a very interesting poem that is filled with lots and lots of imagery. the reader really enjoyed the read.


 Comment Written 05-May-2018



reply by the author on 10-May-2018
    Thank you for the kind review.
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