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Leader Needs Help


We desperately need honesty right now

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jaybird1
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Amen for this.Brief, but to the point.A six for telling it like it is.
My 94 catarack ridden eyes has restricted my posting and
commenting.I now only repost my older posts.Thank you for
bearing with me-Jaybird


 Comment Written 17-Apr-2019



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    God bless you, Jay. So sorry to have bothered you. Your posts are great whether they be revived or new from time to time.

    Your talent never ceases to amaze me. I, too, have cataracks but got surgery in time to forstall serious problems. Bless you, my friend. Bob
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And the situation has only gotten worse since you wrote this poem! I wonder if he actually believes what he says at the time that he says it, or if it all about trying to manipulate. Sighs, but I hope your Four Line Poem was well received- Joan


 Comment Written 30-Jun-2018



reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
    Thank you so much, Joan. It seems that it can only get worse. (sigh) Bob

reply by Joan E. on 30-Jun-2018
    Yes, especially with another Supreme Court Justice appointment on the line... More sighs- Joan
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Hi, Bob

I can definitely relate to the basic premise of this poem. I find the idea of 'relative' honesty, particularly with this presidency, to be personally revolting. I think you've crafted an excellent poem for this contest. Good luck!

:0) Bev


 Comment Written 17-May-2018



reply by the author on 17-May-2018
    It makes me sick too, Bev. I hope they find him guilty of something and throw him out. Thanks so much for your time and the six beauties.. :) X Bob
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Mastery: I don't think the Donald would know the truth if it hit him beside the head with a 10 foot pole with spikes in it.

Hopefully, I am back for a longer spell than last time.

Good to see you.

Jan


 Comment Written 13-May-2018



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    Aww. It'sso good to see your name come up on here, Jan.Thank you so much for the review and the beautiful six stars. Hey, stick round for a while this time,will you? LOL...Bob
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Hello Bob, I like your four-line poem, best of luck in the contest, the words combined with the picture leave the reader in no doubt as to who this poem is about. I am sure some will fall either side, depending on their political bent, whereas, not being American, I can say I enjoyed your poem and understand how you feel. Good word choices and the poem is nicely published, thanks for sharing it, Bob, cheers, Ana.


 Comment Written 13-May-2018



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    Thank you, /Ana. I am not proud of our government right now. (: Bob
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Oh, boy, Bob, your four line poem speaks the truth about our President who is unable to do so. He is a far cry from Honest Abe or little Georgie Washington confessing to chopping down the cherry tree. I've gotten to the point of shutting my ears whenever Trump speaks. You wrote a topical for our time, using the plaintive words "please identify."

Thank you for sharing. I wish you contest success.


 Comment Written 12-May-2018



reply by the author on 12-May-2018
    Thanks a bunch, Andre Yeah. I sure as heck won't win this contest or a popularity contest for that matter. It's a challenge I just had to take. (Wink.) You would be surprised ..I had a couple of people say to me. "I don't know wha you are talking about. I never have seen the president lie. LOL ???????????????? Do you suppose they are deaf AND blind as well. Wow. Bob

    (If you get time look t the reviews this one got. Bob

reply by Sis Cat on 13-May-2018
    Oh, Bob, people actually said they didn't know what you were talking about? So sad.

    Andre

reply by the author on 13-May-2018
    Yup! MelB to be exact. :) Bob
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I'm not sure what he has lied about, maybe the Stormy thing. He has delivered on ISIS, sex trafficking, lower taxes, putting the capital in Israel back where it belongs, and most importantly, putting God back first in this country. The other day, he was responsible for arresting five top ISIS pukes. I think he's doing a great job!


 Comment Written 12-May-2018



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    Yup. Bob
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Another insightful, clever commentary on our current political predicament--and you did it through a brief poem. Thanks for continuing to share you talents! Caroline


 Comment Written 11-May-2018



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    So good to seeyou again,Caroline. Thank you so much for the six star, especilly this late in the week. :) Bob
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Preaching to the choir here, Bob. In this poem, I think you could make your final line a little tighter -
leave out the word "with" or make it "just cannot see it".
Anyway - the message is clear. We're in a real pickle with all that's going on in our country. I can't even watch the news anymore.
Carol


 Comment Written 11-May-2018



reply by the author on 11-May-2018
    Hi, Carol. Once again, I am reminding you that I have to stick to the syllable count in this poem which is nine syllables for the last line. Any suggetions would n=be most appreciated. Thanks so much. Bob

reply by ciliverde on 11-May-2018
    "how about "cannot seem to come to grips with it"?

reply by the author on 12-May-2018
    I will consider thar.Thanks, Carol. :) Bob
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Thanks for sharing this, Bob.

Sadly enough, I have to agree with you. He does seem to have a problem with remaining truthful. JW


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reply by the author on 11-May-2018
    For sure. Bob
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