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Rebirth


My favorite time of the year.

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Raffaelina Lowcock
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The rebirth in Spring confirms the belief that death is not final and rejuvenates the senses with the air of orange blossoms, lilacs, roses, and all the other sweet-smelling flowers. As well, Spring Fever runs rampant.
So with your art and your words, you say it graciously.


 Comment Written 10-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 15-Oct-2019
    Thanks Ralf. : ) Bob
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Dear Bob,
I enjoyed your lovely poem, "Rebirth". With a lovely picture, two verses and six words, I felt the start of a blooming spring.
My best,
Deb


 Comment Written 25-Apr-2019



reply by the author on 26-Apr-2019
    Thank you so much, Deb. I appreciate your looking in my folio and reviewing. :) Bob

reply by DeborahWrite on 26-Apr-2019
    Hello Bob, I enjoyed your poem :) Deb
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Thank you for making your favorite time of the year come alive in this tiny, animated poem. Your title and elegant artwork compliment it perfectly. Best wishes in the Six Word Poetry Contest- Joan


 Comment Written 08-Jun-2018



reply by the author on 09-Jun-2018
    Thank you, Joan. I rarely write poetry..I am more into novel writing. I do appreciate your support and reviewing. :) Bob

reply by Joan E. on 09-Jun-2018
    I hope you continue to spread your wings to poetry periodically. Smiles- Joan

reply by the author on 09-Jun-2018
    :) You can read much more of my poetry in my portfolio by the way. (wink)

reply by Joan E. on 09-Jun-2018
    I definitely will once I've caught up from my recent trip. Smiles- Joan
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Hi, Bob

I always enjoy these short poems because when deftly handled, as this one is by you, they have a strong impact in a small amount of space. It does feel as if Spring has sprung into Summer up here. I really enjoy your poetry!

Your friend, Bev


 Comment Written 02-Jun-2018



reply by the author on 02-Jun-2018
    Thanks so much, Bev. I really always appreciate you and your reviews..especially your generous six stars. I will be posting the first chapter of the new Cleve novel in the morning. :) Bob

reply by Writingfundimension on 02-Jun-2018
    Hey, that's exciting news, Bob. I look forward to reading it! :) Bev
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When the kids were little, I never really appreciated Spring. I saw it as mud and rain season. But as I have aged, it is running neck and neck with fall. Love your poem and art choice.
Today, I finally see spring as a time of renewal.


 Comment Written 31-May-2018



reply by the author on 31-May-2018
    Thanks so much, Alice. Spring is indeed rebirth in my eyess. I love the flowers....especially lilacs. :) Bob

reply by DALLAS01 on 31-May-2018
    :-))
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And a great six words it is! The picture is great and adds to the "springy" feeling! I wish you the past of luck in the contest if it is still pending. Evi


 Comment Written 31-May-2018



reply by the author on 31-May-2018
    Hi, Evi. I am not ssure whether the winner has been annonced yet. LOL.. Thank you for the six stars and your continuing support though. They haven't notified me in any way so I won't break out the champagne just yet. :) Bob
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Hi, Bob, yes, I agree with you. Spring is the most wonderful season because it gives you inspiration for the coming summer. At last it's warm after the winter, everything is starting to grow and new buds appear. Little birds are singing and it gives you the feeling you want to sing with them. Cheers, Giddy


 Comment Written 30-May-2018



reply by the author on 30-May-2018
    Very well put, my friend. Thanks for reviewing this piece. Blessings, Bob (ps. We had no spring here this year. It went right from 6 inches of snow and 32 degrees to 80 degrees and summer-like weather. Tragic,eh?)
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I'm glad you are elated, and you should be
not only that spring has come, but you managed
to create a 6 word poem that says so much.
Lovely image too.
Good luck in the contest.
Nancy


 Comment Written 29-May-2018



reply by the author on 29-May-2018
    Thanks, Nancy, however Ithink my use of the big cliche may edge me out for sure. (: Bob
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Thanks for sharing this, Bob. I am also glad that spring has finally arrived.

I really appreciate you sharing your poetry. However, I wonder if/when are you going to return to your "true" talent - writing novels. JW


 Comment Written 29-May-2018



reply by the author on 29-May-2018
    Hi, JW. I appreciate all of your support. As amatter of fact I intend to post chapter one of the new Cleve Hawkins series called "Shakedown" within the next several days. Also, my third novel, "Falling up The Stairs" will be released on september 20th of this year. Thanks for asking. :) Bob
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This is a such a fun entry for this Six Word Poetry Contest. It is always Summer/Spring here. I must admit, I do miss the changing of seasons.... I don't really miss Winter, but wouldn't mind a few hours of snow. I wish you all the besti this contest.


 Comment Written 29-May-2018



reply by the author on 29-May-2018
    Thanks, Sasha. My only concern is my use of the cliche. "Spring has sprung." I think that alone will shoot me down. Thanks for your support though. Bob

reply by Sasha on 29-May-2018
    I dojn't agree, I like that line...

reply by the author on 29-May-2018
    You are a sweetheart, Sasha. X
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