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Beneath the roar


The purrfect cover up.

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Aaaahahahaha! I shouldn't laugh - pompous a*ses are really not funny, but it's the juxtaposed "declining libidos" that gets me. SO TRUE, although those arrogant fools would not admit it under threat of death. What a great poem!


 Comment Written 04-Jun-2018



reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
    Thanks, Dawn. We all know a few don't we?.

reply by Ideasaregems-Dawn on 04-Jun-2018
    We sure do. You're most welcome.
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A very well-written six-word poem. We need to act from time to time that we are brave and have everything under control although we don't have the energy to get up from our chair.


 Comment Written 04-Jun-2018



reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
    Thanks, Sandra
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With no intent to be too personal, Dallas, I wonder why you chose a lion to illustrate declining libidos, unless you see yourself as a lioness with such a problem with the titular head of the pride. ;)

Good luck in the contest.

Don (Ogden)


 Comment Written 04-Jun-2018



reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
    Just look'n for the roar. Strictly non partisan. Thanks gor reviewing.

reply by Ogden on 04-Jun-2018
    You're welcome, D01.
    Don
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I can think of a few, well-known guys who fit this description! You amaze by saying so much is so few words. And what a perfect picture to accent the "roar"! Best wishes in the Six Word Poem contest- Joan


 Comment Written 04-Jun-2018



reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
    Thanks, Joan.
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very good poem, Dallas. with a little "dig" in it for the braggadocios out there.
good job with the 3-5-7 Haiku-like style...........meeshu


 Comment Written 04-Jun-2018



reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
    Thanks, Meeshu.
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This is very interesting. I really like the clever wording you've used and the message conveyed here. I really like the accompanying artwork. It compliments this poem and the theme of it so well. I enjoyed reading this well written poem that says so much in so few words. Great job and well done Dallas01!


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reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
    Thanks, Jeffrey.
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This is startling poetry. It reminds me of a lot of men I know. Not that they would admit anything. LOL. I wish you lots of luck in the contest, Alice. Blessings, Bob


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reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
    Thanks, Bob.
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Oh this has to be among your best. I burst out with a good laugh, still grinning as I read this. I think the photo added to the poem.
Good work.
I do not read many postings that are sixers...this one 100% all the way.
A good way to end my day.


 Comment Written 03-Jun-2018



reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
    Glad you got a laugh. That"s what it's all about. And thanks for the bonus star.
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Now that's a nice play on words! I appreciate it. Oh, and it's insightful too, of course. You did a nice thing here. I enjoyed reading it. I love the ambiguity between "super ego" in the Freudian sense and "super ego" as in, an ego that is extraordinarily powerful.


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reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
    Thanks, Katya.
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It's unfortunate that those two should occur at the same time. I can certainly see why the lion would have a superego. Most people who have a large ego have no reason to.


 Comment Written 03-Jun-2018



reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
    Right on. Thanks for reviewing.
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