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Her faith makes her whole

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Yes the true "Aussie" Hello fellow Aussie, what an excellent read and poem on Faith, with great artwork to support these wonderful words, very well done and good luck in your competition****kahpot


 Comment Written 09-Jun-2018



reply by the author on 12-Jun-2018
    G'day mate, Thanks so much for reading, your review got me recognised! so pleased you enjoyed my poem. Bless you kapot.
    (what does that mean?) Love, Kace.
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This is unfortunately a true and lasting fact that these traditional Australians face most days.
They are often true and yearn for understanding.

This piece resonates the imbalance of life and all whom live within this multicultural world.

With providing time anda little respect our human nature can truly be enlightened by the people, lives and journeys.

Thanks for sharing
Regards B.M


 Comment Written 09-Jun-2018



reply by the author on 12-Jun-2018
    Bridget, White men think we are savages sometimes. Our culture is the oldest in the world (54.000 years) God is nature, we worship Him. Kind regards, Kace.
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A very determined woman to see pass mans faults and understanding. They must take the time to know her to understand her and what she is all about. God is good.


 Comment Written 09-Jun-2018



reply by the author on 09-Jun-2018
    Hello my friend, Thanks so much for dropping in, glad you liked. Your review has got me recognised! Love, Kay.

reply by country ranch writer on 09-Jun-2018
    So happy for you!
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Beautiful dear Aussie. Just simple as the personality of one you describe. Often hurt and rejection in its simplest form can bridge many gaps, for the pure nature of right, the pure nature of love cannot be turned away every time...it will find a way.
My best wishes.
RG


 Comment Written 05-Jun-2018



reply by the author on 05-Jun-2018
    Hello my friend, Thank you for your kind comments. We worship nature and isn't that what god is all about? Love, K.
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I enjoyed your Faith poem entry, Kay.
I love learning about her and her faith
through your beautiful descriptive lines.
Wonderful images - and a lesson for all.
Don't judge.
Nancy


 Comment Written 04-Jun-2018



reply by the author on 05-Jun-2018
    Hi Nancy, Thanks for reading and glad you enjoyed. God isn't bricks and mortar, we worship His creations. Love, Kay.
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Hi there;

I thank you for giving us a descriptive piece about a different faith as your contribution to the Faith Poetry contest. The image of Dolly and her pace is stamped into my mind as I reflect on the Bahaime belief system. It reminded me a great deal of the Spirit Gods of the Native Americans.

Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest,

~patty~


 Comment Written 04-Jun-2018



reply by the author on 05-Jun-2018
    Hello my friend, Yes, our culture is the oldest in the world. Bahaime is simply aboriginal for Creator. We worship nature in all it's glorious forms. Best wishes, Kay.
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good evening dearest friend,

It goes without saying how much I love your didactic poetry. This is you true niche and it is your signature. Love it truly.. and adore you. Thank you for being a friend...


jimi



 Comment Written 04-Jun-2018



reply by the author on 05-Jun-2018
    Hello Possum, Glad to see you back. Thanks so much for reading, glad you enjoyed a little of our belief. Love you too. Kay XX
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I like the line "Her church is nature blue". It shows the impact of nature and how nature can guide us. This is a wonderful faith based poem that captures another viewpoint on the world. I like how you express in words that this lady should be respected for her wisdom.


 Comment Written 04-Jun-2018



reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
    Elaine, Thanks so much for reading; glad you enjoyed something different. Love, Kay.
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Very well done Kay, it has a wonderful rhyme pattern and is rather easy to read and to understand. Great picture. I really liked the way you presented Dolly's faith and culture. You did a great job making readers understand that to be different is to be okay and that one should not walk away or turn away just because they don't understand. Thanks for sharing.

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 Comment Written 04-Jun-2018



reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
    Hello Aryr, Thanks for reading, glad you liked our point of view. Love, Kay.

reply by aryr on 05-Jun-2018
    You are most welcome Kay.
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A sky dancer - the name says it all, really. How much more in touch with the natural order of things are those whose beliefs are founded in the environment around them.

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 Comment Written 04-Jun-2018



reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
    Thank you my friend, glad you liked nature's own religion. Blessings, Kay.
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