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A poem for girls

  45 total reviews 
Comment by
country ranch writer
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Reaching out to your child to listen and learn and to be all that the can be and along the way turning into the young lady you are ment to be. God watch over you and guides you along the way


 Comment Written 21-Jun-2018



reply by the author on 21-Jun-2018
    Hi Country Rach Writer,
    I haven't been on the site much this year so I've missed much of your writing. I was happy to see your name pop up because I was just wondering about you a couple days ago and if you were still writing. I am delighted to see that you are.
    Thank you so much for dropping in to read and review. I appreciate your feedback.
    Debi

reply by country ranch writer on 22-Jun-2018
    I am still here I too have been hit and miss on here due to life changes. I hope I can write on a regular basis soon. Things have kept me away.
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RFL
 
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This is a lovely poem that hold a child in your heart. There is nothing to love more than a growing, blossoming human being that you have created. Thank you for sharing the beauty of in your heart through your writing. Best, Rona


 Comment Written 20-Jun-2018



reply by the author on 22-Jun-2018
    Hi Rona,
    Thank you for the excellent review. I appreciate you stopping by to read my work
    Debi
Comment by
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Wow! This is so beautiful. We should always remember that we are children of God. Thank you for this beautiful poem. Keep up the great work and I hope you have a blessed day. Congratulations!


 Comment Written 20-Jun-2018



reply by the author on 22-Jun-2018
    Thank you for the encouraging words, Yemima Kebede. I appreciate your insights on the topic as well. God bless.
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Joy Graham
 
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Oh this is awful that I don't have any sixes left for you today. I'm so kicking myself. This is an absolutely gorgeous poem, Debi! Seriously!! It's not in any contest so I'm predicting it will get a nomination for poem of the monh. If it doesn't get nominated then I'd be disappointed. Your message brings tears to my eyes. I love that God is talking to you, the girl in the picture. It's just so breathtaking with a beautiful message. Le sigh...

Joy xx


 Comment Written 20-Jun-2018



reply by the author on 23-Jun-2018
    Thank you, Joy.
    I appreciate the sentiment both of the virtual six and the poem of the month nomination. You are so sweet to say that. I am honored that this poem touched you and brought tears to your eyes. Good bless.
    Debi
Comment by
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This is so good! I got crazy goosebumps while I soaked in each word. This is authentic writing from the heart. A deep message was spoken to me through your words today. Thank you for being a vessel. I needed this.


 Comment Written 20-Jun-2018



reply by the author on 20-Jun-2018
    I am so flattered by your words. I am happy to hear this has helped in some way. I also appreciate the shiny six star rating, but your words mean even more.
    Debi
Comment by
Deirdre Anne Gialamas
 
 
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Dear W.J.Debi,
This was very readable. Perfect rhyming. It sends out your intended message very effectively and has no weak spots in it. Well done!
Warmest wishes,
Deirdre Anne


 Comment Written 20-Jun-2018



reply by the author on 20-Jun-2018
    Thank you for the positive review and warm wishes, Deirdre Anne.
    Debi
Comment by
Michele Harber
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Wow! I haven't got a single corrective criticism. The rhyme and meter are perfect, the idea of the poem is beautiful, and the flow is beyond reproach. You're an excellent poet, and I look forward to reading more of your work.


 Comment Written 20-Jun-2018



reply by the author on 20-Jun-2018
    Thank you for such a positive response! I appreciate the six stars and the gracious comments. Thank you so much!
    Debi

reply by Michele Harber on 20-Jun-2018
    I only discovered FanStory recently, and am happy to say that the four poems I've submitted have gotten only 5-star reviews but, in all honesty, I thought your poem was better than any of mine. I hit most of the marks, but you hit them all. Therefore, rating your work what mine were rated would have been a disservice to you.
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Your poem is carefully wrought, with precise meter and exceptional rhyming, more impressive for having to compromise either, by straying from your loving message.

Nice work, W.J.!

Don (aka Ogden)


 Comment Written 20-Jun-2018



reply by the author on 20-Jun-2018
    Hi Don,
    Thank you for the kind comments.
    Debi

reply by Ogden on 20-Jun-2018
    You're very welcome Debi. I'm pleased to meet you.

    In re-reading my comments, I just noticed I accidentally omitted the word 'not' before 'having to compromise.' Your sincerity was quite evident.

    Don


reply by the author on 20-Jun-2018
    I understood. I seem to do that quite often myself. Or spellcheck changes the meaning completely.

reply by Ogden on 20-Jun-2018
    yes, that spellcheck can be sneaky about it, too.
Comment by
Cindy McIntyre
 
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What a lovely poem and a great tribute to girls (or boys as you mentioned). I love the lessons it conveys and the emotions it prompts. Well-written and a joy to read.


 Comment Written 19-Jun-2018



reply by the author on 20-Jun-2018
    Hi Cindy,
    Thank you for the kind comments. I am happy to hear you enjoyed reading this verse.
    Debi
Comment by
Benny Beeharry
 
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Hi old friend,

I really love this write, so full of prayer, worship and profound sincerity. The words are exact, and tell what ihey were intended to say , very good choice of words in rack. There is a deeper philosophy of love for the father in there which touches the heart. Well done and I am glad I read it.

Danny Jock(Benny Beeharry)


 Comment Written 19-Jun-2018



reply by the author on 20-Jun-2018
    Hi Danny (Benny),
    Thank you for stopping by and for the kind words of encouragement and your insights on the topic. I am glad you enjoyed it.
    Debi
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