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Travelling through time


Free Verse for Freeversers Club

  18 total reviews 
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Halfree
 
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This proves something to me...we ain't that much different. This story could well be my story, childhood days. Took me back to some wonderful summer days. Good work and thanks for sharing...worth my read. Started with five, reread and since there is no 7 star rating, settled for 6


 Comment Written 19-Jun-2018



reply by the author on 20-Jun-2018
    Many thanks Halfree for reading and reviewing m free verse on children through the generations
    I'm glad it bought back some happy memories for you too, and thank you for the compliment of the 6 stars,
    very much appreciated
    cheers
    vada
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Books are important but have lost their appeal somewhat in today's society. The feel of the pages running through one's fingers is replaced by the swiping a page on a kindle. Thank you for sharing this nostalgic poem.


 Comment Written 19-Jun-2018



reply by the author on 19-Jun-2018
    Many thanks for reading and for reviewing my free verse on children through the generations. I'm pleased to say my grandchildren still love their books, real page turning books.
    thanks again, very much appreciated,
    cheers,
    valda
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A very well-written free verse poem about your childhood games in the streets without any cares in the world. Many traditions are carried over for generations, the only thing our grandchildren not often do is to play outside without fear.


 Comment Written 19-Jun-2018



reply by the author on 19-Jun-2018
    Yes, you're right there, this generation of children don't get to play outside with all the neighbourhood children, a sign of these times. Thanks very much for reading and reviewing Sandra, always very much appreciated,
    cheers,
    valda
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Angela Hayes
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Good read, interesting, inspirational and educational, past to modern day, traditional, word travel, good choice of subject, creative thinking, good background colour, image to match movement/travel,

Good Luck!


 Comment Written 19-Jun-2018



reply by the author on 19-Jun-2018
    Many thanks Angela for reading and for your comments on my free verse, about children through the generations.
    Much appreciated,
    cheers.

reply by Angela Hayes on 19-Jun-2018
    You're welcome, have a great day!
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58, was a good year. Nice rump through time. I love freestyle I don't know all the rules but you might want to check some of your capitalization "darts and Chinese Checkers. I could be wrong. Thanks for sharing and keep writing and reading.


 Comment Written 19-Jun-2018



reply by the author on 19-Jun-2018
    Many thanks for reading and for your comments on my free verse. I do enjoy the free verse style, you can just let your thoughts flow. And thanks for the capitalization suggestion, I will check it out.
    cheers.
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Absolutely gorgeous travel through time, Valda. I agree with you completely about the value of hard copy books, although ebooks are good too, reading is the way to take in information because it involves different mental processes.

Super addition to the Free Verse potlatch too. Thank you for the reminded.

Much enjoyed.

Gloria


 Comment Written 19-Jun-2018



reply by the author on 19-Jun-2018
    Many thanks Gloria for reading and for your lovely response to my free verse on children through the generations.
    I think it's wonderful that the children of today still love their books in this electronic age.
    Thanks again, really do appreciate all those stars,
    cheers,
    valda
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Excellent and yes it is a wonderful thing when important parts of an upbringing are passed down and held onto, as everyone's time is all we have, very well written****kahpot

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 Comment Written 19-Jun-2018



reply by the author on 19-Jun-2018
    Many thanks kahpot for reading and for your review on my free verse on children through the generations. Yes, it is lovely to see that things that we thought were, important our children now carry it through with their children.
    thanks again,
    cheers.
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Alexander Vasa
 
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Hello Pearl, lovely write for the club ... I like this time period and you describe it well. I liked the imagery it creates and the picture is a great fit for the writing. I saw no errors, and this was a pleasure to read and review, cheers, Ana.

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 Comment Written 19-Jun-2018



reply by the author on 19-Jun-2018
    Many thanks for reading and for your review on my free verse on children through the generations,
    very much appreciated,
    cheers.
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