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For my daughter, a beloved daughter

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I can see how popular you are, it GREAT to read your posts again. It's a lovely tribute to your daughter. I hope you are well.
Welcome back
Hugs Trisha


 Comment Written 18-Jul-2018


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"She calls me Dad." Although this is in honor of the wonderful person your daughter is, it is also a tribute to yourself for accepting and loving her. This poem wonderfully expresses the bond that is formed between and father and his daughter. The rhyming is well done. Keep on writing - writing might be your "second daughter."


 Comment Written 18-Jul-2018


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Jaybird1: an excellent write! And, with it, a surprise at the end. Such a beautiful "thank you" to your adored daughter! Your rhyming is perfect, your message heartfelt. Thank you for putting some beauty in this mixed up world. livelylinda


 Comment Written 18-Jul-2018


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Wow thats cool, that you have been writing poetry for the last 70 years. Clearly very passionate about writing, even a small poem can make a huge impression. Enjoy what you have written, it is sad but sometimes the best poems come from the hardest times in our lives.


 Comment Written 18-Jul-2018


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This is so very precious. I love that you have written such a beautiful tribute to your lovely daughter. How honored she must be! I am sorry for your loss but so thankful you have a daughter that helps you. Thank you for sharing your poem!


 Comment Written 18-Jul-2018


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what a lovely poem to our daughter.
And what a wonderful pastime, writing poetry.
I'll have to read some of your others.
Isn't it grand, getting pleasure from something we love to do.
Congratulations on getting recognized.
pome lover


 Comment Written 18-Jul-2018


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Wow! This is a warm and loving write and a great tribute to your beloved daughter. Your flow and rhymes make this poem sheer joy to read, a cleverly constructed quality poem, loved it, love Dolly x


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Like you, I have the sweetest daughters, although I have also the sweetest wife, plus a very close friend, I consider myself to be rich in assets, but perhaps poor in monetary terms, well done, an excellent work in rhyming couplets and articulate tetrametric rhyming couplets, well done, blessings, Roy


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Excellent. Such a sweet poem. Nice pacing and sequencing. Rhyming is very good. I love the opening line, "My main Maine friend...". Since I've been on this site I have grown to appreciate rhyming poetry. Very good. Hugh


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This one brought a tear - I have a daughter, four of them in fact, who encourage me as yours does you. I've not lost my wife of 50+ years, but I know that the girls would be right here to bring me through it. A fine poem, thank you for sharing it.


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